People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment—doing things they like to do—rather than doing things they should do.
Everyone has a different purpose of earning, some earn to fulfill their basic needs, some to live a luxurious life, and various purposes similar to this, If we focus on recent vogue, people are more into enjoying things and they spend their money on things they like to do rather than they should do.
To begin with, we can see that nowadays it is very easy to get a decent job and to complete the need of an individual. Also nowadays people live alone from family, don't get married, so they don't have responsibilities to anyone and have to invest all their money in themselves. This culture is very common nowadays and so people choose a job which gives them sufficient amount to complete their basic needs. People are so obsessed with all the dream fulfillment concepts, that they consider a job as secondary and earn money to pursue their dream. Sometimes the dreams are worth investing but they lead in the wrong direction when people have dreams that only waste money and harm to self. For example, if a person earns decent money which is required to complete their degree and make the house or whatever genuine things but as the person is thinking of short term enjoyment they invest money on parties, throw a party every night, travel the same place frequently, enjoying luxurious things which are not required for now, so this perhaps people are doing these days. In such a situation they are just wasting money on transient things. I feel it's necessary to enjoy every phase of life but remember the consequences of wrong enjoyment.
To carry on this further, people sometimes so lost on all these things, make these enjoyment priorities that they have to heed that in future. We know that everything comes with time and stays for a time. Youngsters sometimes forget that they will get older soon and feel like their life will remain the same. If they consume all their money today and are left with no money for the future then that would lead to future livelihood problems. When we get older our body does not have the same potential as we have today and we won't able to work effectively and earn less money. So by considering the above statement I feel it is necessary to use the money on the required things. People so easily forget about insurance, buying a house, and cars, investing in properties, and savings. I feel these are essential to do in younger life to secure future but those who are too busy on temporary enjoyment don't understand the need of all these things, they only understand when they face difficulties in future.
I have seen people wasting money on not required things and also seen them in the worst condition in their old age, and its lesson for this young generation that we should use money wisely, exgravated and unplanned use of money can only make us suffer in future. I feel when we use money via proper planning we can enjoy today and also can enjoy things in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: don't
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Suggestion: don't
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... priorities that they have to heed that in future. We know that everything comes with tim...
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Suggestion: don't
...who are too busy on temporary enjoyment dont understand the need of all these things...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... understand when they face difficulties in future. I have seen people wasting money on...
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Suggestion: in the future
...ed use of money can only make us suffer in future. I feel when we use money via proper pl...
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...oney can only make us suffer in future. I feel when we use money via proper plann...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, then, for example, i feel, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2407.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 519.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63776493256 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7730044521 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36094128589 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44894026975 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 761.4 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.8915123127 48.9658058833 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.684210526 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3157894737 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52631578947 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276765617929 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820269007138 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958738652221 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210338964494 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124938765583 0.0645574589148 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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