People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.
Different people will give different responses to this question from their own characters and emotional concerns as well as even educational backgrounds. However, when it comes to me, I believe that because of inflation we have to work, so we have to earn our daily bread. I would like to further illustrate my reasons in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, people work for earning money; therefore, they can gain goods and foods for their family. These days everything needs money from keeping live to death. But I believe that we do not have to earn from a bad way for earning money. I do believe in this English proverb that " easy come easy going". Some people earn money with defrauding, I strongly believe that neither do these kinds of money help nor do they improve.
If people earn money from safe way, not only can they live with a calm but also they can enjoy more and more before than past.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, well, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 15.1003584229 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 52.1666666667 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 758.0 1977.66487455 38% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 163.0 407.700716846 40% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65030674847 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 4.48103885553 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41946576664 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 212.727598566 48% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631901840491 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 618.680645161 38% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1678835725 48.9658058833 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.2222222222 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22237251603 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904406077105 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651893382112 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148509927835 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412547007772 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 86.8835125448 29% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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