A Person should never make an important decision alone
Yes, I totally agree on this point that ," A Person should never make an important decision alone". In my life , whenever I take the important decisions I alway refer other people opinion.
The most important decison in my life is to decide my education stream. At that time I first talk with my parent and my friends what they are think for me. After that I take the advice form my carrier consultant. Everybody help me to the decision according to their aspects. I never want to be in trouble so that's why I consider everybody opinion about my carrier then after I come to final decision that I have to take the computer stream. And now I feel that I am in good position because I never took my decision alone.
I really feel that whenever you consider other opinion.It means that you use their experience to take the decision. Because everybody have their own vision. We can used their experiences to make our decision correct and fix.
Furthermore,the chief minister of any city can't take important decision alone still chief minister have the rights to take the decision alone. Because the one man can never think about all possiblity related to the any issue. They have to think each and very aspect about it. This is not possibal for only one man. So that's why chief minister consider all other minister opinion then all together take the decision. Because any wrongs decision will cause serious problem to that city.
So finally, I must say that never take important decision alone. You have lot of option to may decision strong and correct.USe that option and make your future bright.
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It is necessary to write 3
It is necessary to write 3 reason in the essay. 2 reasons are not sufficient?
3 reasons are better. No
3 reasons are better. No problem for 2 reasons.
After that I take the advice form my carrier consultant.
After that I take the advice from my career consultant.
Everybody help me to the decision according to their aspects.
Everybody helps me to the decision according to their aspects.
Because everybody have their own vision.
Because everybody has his own vision.
still chief minister have the rights to take the decision alone
still chief ministers have the rights to take the decision alone
So that's why chief minister consider all other minister opinion
So that's why chief minister considers all other ministers' opinion
Sentence: In my life , whenever I take the important decisions I alway refer other people opinion.
Error: alway Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: The most important decison in my life is to decide my education stream.
Error: decison Suggestion: decision
Sentence: Because the one man can never think about all possiblity related to the any issue.
Error: possiblity Suggestion: possibility
Sentence: This is not possibal for only one man.
Error: possibal Suggestion: possible
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.15 21.0
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Para 1: introduction. my choice: A or B. agree or disagree.
Para 2:First,reason 1 (1 sentence) + why reason 1(some arguments. 2-3 sentences) + examples for reason 1 (around 2 sentences) + small conclusions (like advantages of reason 1 or comparisons if not reason 1, 1-2 sentences).
Para 3:Second,reason 2 ,blabla... do the same thing like First
Para 4:Third, reason 3 blabla... do the same thing like First but shorter
Para 5: Conclusion.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 16 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 283 350
No. of Characters: 1284 1500
No. of Different Words: 144 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.102 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.537 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.273 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 83 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 62 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 41 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.15 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.036 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.355 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.551 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.135 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5