In last decades, the automobile has become the most popular and demanding invention and acquired wide use in developed and developing countries alike. Although it has few advantages, such as the delivering people and cargo to point of destination in a few time, the disadvantages outweigh the benefits of using automobiles. I am from opinion that the transportation systems, especially, automobile ruins our quality of lives.
To begin with, there are a plenty of people using automobiles, and it is true that there are more than one automobiles in a family. As the number of people increase, the demand for cars is also develops. Thus, it leads to massive traffic jams on big roads for no reason. As a result, the advantage of delivering people or courier to destination in a time is ignored. For instance, a few months before i had an exam, which has an important value on me, and for lots of automobiles, I was late. After that, the principal of my school does not let me take the exam. That day is the day I use my bicycle instead of a transportation system, and this method prevented me to be lazy.
The second most major problem that automobile causes is air pollution. It is fact that cars exhaust engines, which are toxic gases, to large territories. Thus, when people wait in traffic jams they inhale the poisonous gases and as a result, it affects the human organism, such as causing chronical diseases. Moreover, it has an impact on climate. In precisely. the toxic gases prevent an exchange of heat between Earth and the atmosphere and causing a greenhouse effect. As a result, there will be huge damage to the climate.
To sum up, there can be benefits of automobiles, however, personally, the drawbacks exceed the positive ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'few times'.
Suggestion: few times
... and cargo to point of destination in a few time, the disadvantages outweigh the benefit...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hus, it leads to massive traffic jams on big roads for no reason. As a result, th...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ored. For instance, a few months before i had an exam, which has an important val...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ch has an important value on me, and for lots of automobiles, I was late. After t...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...has an impact on climate. In precisely. the toxic gases prevent an exchange of heat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, second, so, thus, for instance, such as, as a result, it is true, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81395348837 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87012810623 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56146179402 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7683912903 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2352941176 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7058823529 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0397488233616 0.236089414692 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0125568838731 0.076458572812 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0209319964308 0.0737576698707 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0266208820022 0.150856017488 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00975976311334 0.0645574589148 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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