playing games teach us about life. agree or disagree
Games have a tremendous and influential leverage on our daily life. It is utterly important to appreciate its effect on our community. Although some people hold the viewpoint that playing games is a waste of time. However, others may hold a different intellect and disagree with this notion. My personal experience and actual observation of life had led me to agree with the idea that involving in certain games can equip us with knowledge which will be helpful in our life. In the following essay, I shall delve into most outstanding reasons.
First and foremost, playing games will ameliorate our communications and sharpening our thinking in a direction of team work. Each person will not work alone and will enhance his team spirit. For instance, when I was playing volley ball in the school, I met many friends in the team. I learned how to work together and be a good listener. Later in my jobs after graduation, I was a good manager and been loved by all employee as I learned how to work in contact with others as a team.
Another reason which deserves some words, playing games will enhance our skills and knowledge to effectively respond to the increase demand, challenges, and opportunities of competitiveness. For example, playing with other will let me gain some experience who to face any challenges and stay away from any problems that may happened. Furthermore, will teach me how to deal with hard situation and absorbed the angers of others .
In a nutshell, judging the reasons that I mentioned before, taking all the factors into account, I would reinforce my idea that playing games have a positive and colossal effect on our life because it enhance our socialization and gain us some skills and information to how to deal with the situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91694352159 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80514393701 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548172757475 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1683631493 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6666666667 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220825490554 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674910250319 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625383605461 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134785933602 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712531200471 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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