QUALITIES OF A GOOD NEIGHBOR.
Neighbors are an important part of any community. They are people who always stay close to us. Some people do not bother about their neighbor`s qualities. On the other hand, I think that for a peaceful life, our neighbors should be cooperative and friendly. I have two reasons for my explanation which I will present below.
To begin with, I believe that neighbors are people who are sometimes closer to us than our family members who live far away. If our neighbors are helping and supportive, it will be easy for us to stay in that community. My personal example is here. We live in a community where all the people surrounding us are very cooperative. One day I left the stove on mistakenly. I forgot to check that at night time, and unfortunately on that night our house electricity got sparkles and it caught fire. Our whole kitchen caught fire. We were so shocked that we did not know what to do at that time of difficulty. Our neighbors not only call the fire brigade but also let us stay at their house for that night. They were keeping us calm and taking care of us whole night. Honestly without them, we were not be able to handle that terrible situation that night. This example demonstrates that how much a supportive and caring neighbors are important in our lives.
What`s more, friends are very important in our lives, and if our neighbors are our friends that is the luckiest situation. I think if our neighbors are friendly, we can share our feelings with them, and spend good time with them. For instance, I am a nurse and my husband is a doctor. Depending on our profession`s nature, sometimes we need to stay at work till late night. My neighbor Jeena is a very good friend of mine. At those situation, she let my daughter stay at her house. Not only this, she is also very friendly with daughter. My daughter is just six years old, but go to Jeena`s house happily because of her friendly nature. In addition, we mostly do house parties in our community every other weekened as our all neighbors are very friendly and fun loving. That`s why being friendly as your neighbor is worthwhile.
In sum, although some people do not care, but I personally think that neighbors should be cooperative and friendly. In this way, they can help us in thick and thin. Moreover, their friendly nature makes our bound with them stronger. Therefore, in my view, these two qualities are very important for a good neighbor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 798, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...ght. Honestly without them, we were not be able to handle that terrible situation ...
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Line 3, column 436, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this situation' or 'those situations'?
Suggestion: this situation; those situations
...Jeena is a very good friend of mine. At those situation, she let my daughter stay at her house....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, honestly, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, i think, in addition, in my view, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 83.0 43.0788530466 193% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2024.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67436489607 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7016126402 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4896073903 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 626.4 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 26.0 9.59856630824 271% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5394055937 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.2903225806 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9677419355 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41935483871 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210126720665 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612630354823 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911536339528 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154043872775 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643357047306 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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