should children be required to spend sometimes in doing household chores
Currently, society has witnessed an unprecedented boom in the economy, therefore there is an increasing number of citizens putting more emphasis on children’s upbringing, thus a heated discussion has been triggered that should children be required to do some household chores, such as vacuuming the floors, taking out the garbage and things like that. Numerous individuals reckon that given the pressure caused by excessive school assignments, children ought not to be mandated to do household chores. However, I cannot concur with this opinion. I harbor the idea that it is an optimal choice for parents to ask their children to do housework with them and my view can be substantiated as follows.
To start with, doing housework enables tender children to reinforce their self-independence. Nowadays, owing to the implementation of the one-child policy, nearly all both nuclear families and extended families only have one beloved child, hence all attentions have been paid to the tender child no matter how old she or he is, a toddler or a preschooler or even an adult. Under this circumstance, parents and older generations are in charge of every trivial affair and nothing falls on children’s shoulder, which fosters their dependence on guardians. However, the reality is that children have to grow adults and at a certain age, they are doom to leave their families and live without help from others. When they live alone, they have no alternatives but to tackle all housework by themselves, for instance, doing the dishes, cooking on their own. Provided that they have been carefully tended for several years, how can they become capable of doing household chores promptly? Consequently, it is self-explanatory that parents are supposed to ask their children to have intervention in doing household chores. There is no need for parents to assign all housework to children, which is far beyond their capabilities. What parents can do is to letting them know how to do trifling affairs efficaciously and offering some techniques for them. Little by little, children are informed of the efficacious way to finish housework and strengthen their self-dependence.
What’s more, doing housework together is also a terrific opportunity for parents and children to ameliorate their family bonds. To be more specific, owing to the sizzling economy and the ever fierce competition, both parents and children are preoccupied with tremendous affairs. Parents have to tackle issues in their jobs, while children are burdened with extra curriculum and practices assigned by teachers. Therefore, the estrangement may be germinated under this circumstance owing to the dearth of efficient communication. Nevertheless, doing household chores renders them the leisure time to communicate with each other. Initially, children are more willing to share their happiness and sorrows in schools in a relaxing atmosphere. Hearing the problems that perplex their beloved children, parents are capable of providing several suggestions to grapple with the issues. Some of them can even give life guidance so as to prevent children from behaving in a socially unacceptable way. Meanwhile, parents can also share their baffling problems in jobs, which enables children to have mutual comprehension of parents. Gradually, the gap between generations can be easily eliminated without much efforts and relationships are also ameliorated.
Admittedly, children are enslaved by escalating practices and they have an imperative need to rejuvenate themselves in leisure time. Nevertheless, parents are also exhausted after finishing their work. It will not cost much energy and time to assist parents in finishing housework.
In a nutshell, I would like to reiterate my opinion that children are supposed to assist their parents to do some household chores because it is not only beneficial for them to enhance their living techniques but also contributes to improving their intimate family relationships.
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Suggestion: to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, while, as to, for instance, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 15.1003584229 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 86.0 52.1666666667 165% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3375.0 1977.66487455 171% => OK
No of words: 618.0 407.700716846 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46116504854 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.98594081286 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08478966099 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 310.0 212.727598566 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501618122977 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 1046.7 618.680645161 169% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0736482336 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.535714286 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.03571428571 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251594574667 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761049015383 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602741871051 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154331828368 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845876234016 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 10.9000537634 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 169.0 86.8835125448 195% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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