No doubts that the Earth is our beloved planet. We raised on it , and we have our life on it. Human activities is , of course, improved our planet, by building and inventing a lot of modern staff that allow our planet to look better. But, at the same time many of human activities have harmed the planet.
In my opinion, the first thing to be mentioned about the harmful human activities is Pollution. We used different kinds of energy, oil, fuel, and electricity. All of these have bad effects on the Earth. For example, the polluted air which is coming from a lot of factories. This has a serious effect on the atmosphere, and the plants. What's more , the uses of plastic bottles. For instance, earlier this year, I read an article about how the plastic bottles never decomposes. And how such plastics have a critical role in harming out planet. And many factories get rid from these bottles by throwing them in the sea. In my opinion , the people have to review their activities in way that improve the Earth.
The second important point is that, growing population is within the factors that harm the Planet. How
: by increasing the number of people the number of living places will increase also. the Best example I can mention now is a skyscraper. In our world we have hundreds of such building to allow people to live. Especially, in the countries that have a limited space. As a result , people are invented more things to let the life goes easily, but at the same time will these harm our planet.
After pondering over above mentioned points, according to me, human activities have harmed the Earth by pollution and by extended over the Earth to get more places for living. We have to take care about our beloved Planet which gives us a beautiful place for living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, so, for example, for instance, no doubt, of course, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64126984127 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42915556732 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530158730159 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.702010452 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.4545454545 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3181818182 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235206335061 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660028964854 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736948480424 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124904449171 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537998542979 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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