Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Other believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to schoolwork, which of the two approaches do you prefer?
There is no denying to the fact that nowadays, raising the children needs to be redefined; therefore, the art of growing the children is more comprehensive expression. So the controversial question is what parents should do with the little time that has left for spending with their kids. A plethora of people holds this conviction that playing with children is the things that they truly need it. Contrary to this popular belief, there are those who take radically different point of view and say that allocating sufficient time for the schoolwork of children is very essential issue. I am of the opinion that, children need their parents’ attention and affection in different aspect of their lives, and the following explanation will further elaborate on this perspective.
First and foremost, rapid changes and complexity of today’s world represent new demands on all the people. Undoubtedly, spending long hours in workplace is one of the primary consequences of modern life. Regardless of the positive influences of this kind of life, the obvious issue is children is getting more and more alone. The distinct feature of kids is they learn most of the thing by themselves or by watching their counterparts. As a result it is very important for parents to teach their dears various facet of live. Admittedly, the best way is playing with them. By creating fun atmosphere in the family children become more interesting to spend their time with their parent and it opens up an opportunity for the parents to teach the necessarily things to their kids.
Another vital fact that should be taken into consideration is that the education system has changes incredibly so that the students may not need to assign a lot of time doing their homework. Consequently, the students’ time outside the school is their free time that can be spend with their friends or other activities. This issue entirely corresponds with the situation of the parents who do not have much time to spend with their parent, thus there is no denying to the fact that both parents and children prefer to do something fun in that time rather than concentrating on school materials. Besides, these actions will assist them to be prepared for other mental deeds in the future since it causes they become distracted from all those tension and stress that encounter during the day.
On the basis of the points mentioned above, I am convinced that due to the particular features of the modern lifestyle, the important characteristic that distinguish good parents from bad ones is how the use the little time to teach their kids with playing with them, according to this issue that education system simplify this procedure for them increasingly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, if, may, so, therefore, thus, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2282.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04867256637 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80086049004 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506637168142 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 680.4 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.8949970447 48.9658058833 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.235294118 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5882352941 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.70588235294 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338958365824 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106536222664 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088339910693 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204043547095 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662066748484 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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