In our modern life, parents have many responsibilities and have less time for their children. From my point of view, parents should have fun with their children when they have limited time because children need to have fun with parents and they will mostly remember the good times when they become adults.
To start with, children are in need of sharing enjoyable time with their parents. It is a fact that children look for attention from their parents. However, today's busy life style makes parents busy in order to provide for family. Many parents have only limited time to share with kids because their busy schedule is not parallel with the kid's needs. Whenever they have that limited time, they should use it to make their kids happy and smile. When it comes to make a child happy, it is the easiest thing to do. Parents should have a tendency to do whatever the child wants, such as playing video games or playing outside. For instance, it is always playing video games for my nephew. If his father plays with him, he is the happiest kid in the world. A recent study has shown that children who have more time with their parents while they grow up become more successful in life.
Another point to consider is that many children are likely to remember fun times when they get older. Let's imagine yourself in the past for a second. Which memory comes to your mind first? For many people it is the most enjoyable time with parents. Therefore, a kid would not be able to remember the time when his mom tried to force him to study more. Things related to schoolwork are included to children's responsibilities and children are aware of that they have to do it. Besides, many of them never enjoy doing homework. Thus, young people are not tend to share that boring time with their parents. In fact, they are willingness to do their homework if they know they might have time to play with their parents. It is such a reward for a child to have fun time with a busy parent. Moreover, that kind of fun time with parents create a child's creativity. A study in a university neurology department claims that a child's creativity comes from the valuable time they had with their parents.
To sum up, the best choice for busy parents is to enjoy the minimal time with their children instead of wasting that time for helping school work since children need to have fun with their parents and cumulate memories to remember.
- Integrated writing - TPO 51 3
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 103, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...remember fun times when they get older. Lets imagine yourself in the past for a seco...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, look, moreover, second, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in fact, kind of, such as, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1993.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 432.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61342592593 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24390344407 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4375 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 611.1 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.1673156165 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.72 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.28 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.450189370025 0.236089414692 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14730979714 0.076458572812 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849688798523 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.333063865623 0.150856017488 221% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173603029289 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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