Some people like to keep a record of their own experiences by uploading pictures and other information to social-networking sites. Other people prefer not to create such records.Which approach do you prefer, and why?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's society, with social media platforms being prevalent, many people upload their experiences onto these platforms while others don't. I believe that keeping records from different experiences and sharing them with others on social-networking platforms is an act that benefits oneself and others. I will discuss my reasoning for this notion in the following essay.
First, the pictures and videos uploaded allow us to have organized and well-developed shelves of our experiences, making it easier to access when wanting to review particular experiences and even remanence by remembering the times we had during these operations. For example, after finishing a project for a data science competition, my two other teammates and I uploaded our experiences and reports onto a social media platform. After three years, I still go and read the reports uploaded at the time to get inspiration for my new work. Every time it brings a smile to my face, thinking of the hardships of the time we had together and our hard-earned achievements.
Second, even if the records gathered from the experience are accidentally lost, the files are well kept in the sites and can be restored. For example, when PCs crash, leading to the loss of a big chunk of data and photos with no way of restoring them. If the reports and experiences have been backed up and uploaded to a social networking site, these files can be restored.
Third, when we upload an experience, people with more experience may come forward and comment on our work leading us to improve upon our mistakes. People with less or no experience can learn from our experience. For example, many students, including myself, have been agonizing over how to study for the TOEFL test, but many others have uploaded their experiences on social platforms like Instagram. This allows many novices to get an idea about where to start their journey towards their intended score.
In conclusion, based on the above reasonings, I believe sharing and keeping records of experiences on social-networking platforms is a worthwhile and helpful action.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, still, third, well, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11403508772 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92008073793 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540935672515 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.283353895 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.6 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216250036665 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788519298387 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549177830058 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135702154959 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496196663712 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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