Undoubtedly traveling is an opportunity to explore new experiences and more connectedness. Some members of the public prefer to have travel alone and others in a group. I prefer to travel alone, and there are several reasons I feel this way that I will determine in the following essay.
To begin with, travel alone provides opportunities for personal selection, and there are no commitments for following others. I do not have to rely on others to visit or go shopping. As well as, Scheduling for travel is convenient because everyone is aware of their interests. for example, I traveled to Dubai with my family last year. Our favorites were different, while they expected me to follow them anywhere, and I could not enjoy my journey.
In addition, traveling with others imposes more payment seeing that compliments are customary in my country and traveling with others will put you under the pressure of extra cost. It will cost an arm and a leg. for instance, I had gone to a picnic with my friends, and I got a meal for them, but they did not pay, and their lunch was on me.
Moreover, traveling in a group takes far more time than traveling alone. Sometimes, one person's unpredicted circumstances will change a journey plan completely. My personal experience is a compelling example of this; at university group travel, one of my classmates engaged with illness, and we had to reduce our five-day traveling to two days.
In a nutshell, travel is a charming chance, and selecting one strategy depends on lifestyle and personality. Although I prefer to select singly travel and this style of traveling is a good match with my personality, I think traveling either in a group or alone is not crucial; leaving the home country to gain novel experiences is significantly more important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in addition, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 305.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87213114754 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91168216664 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573770491803 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.917761452 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.875 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345504961436 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124603915664 0.076458572812 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100381929209 0.0737576698707 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217399916412 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816733404184 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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