In the modern days the internet provides people a necessary rule in their lives. Some people believes that The internet provides amounth of precios data. However others disagree. In my opinion the Internet has provided alot of valuable information. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
Firt of all, access to the intenrent leads people to get rid of with lots of their puzels which is created in every days life especialy in scinece fild. scientist are engaging with lots of question in their life whci are part of their researches. In addition, they would need some resources to sort their problem which Internet invented the oppourtunity for researcher to share their depictions which will help other popular people to acces them and solve their question as well. One of my own experienc is a good case in point. I remember one day I was getting an bearable ache in my nech which concens me about. I was feeling devastating and mobilazing. I could not even move my nech for a second. the doctores was not in access therefore, I had to search on the interenet about my ache. What was realy amazing was that I could find the reasons of my eche in addition to finding the treat for it. Thanks to technologt and the internet which creat this opurtunity for us which access us to the scientist ideas about diffrent part og medicine. If I coudnt acces to the internet at that time, I would have never found the treatment of my eche.
Second, the internet would connect people fastly to the news about climate change in diffrent part of the world which is kind of nessaeserly news for every one to know about them.
If people could access to the internet in every place that they are they would have a chanc o inform by the internet from dangerous event which will happend in their futures life.
my friends example is a good case in point. she is a addicted technologycal person which has alvayes conected to the internet in every time. one day we were set off a trip in the winter. we leave our house in the dark dawn. we were mid along of the city. Hoever the wether was becaming rainy. but before the wether become worh my friend find a quick way by the using internet which showes us a quick way. There for we could pass the dangrous way which would leeds lots of problem aftter that rainy days.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that the internet is not only help people to share their Idea but also leads people to know about nesesry news.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2038.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51884700665 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.332990448 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487804878049 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 637.2 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.6005550741 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4814814815 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7037037037 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241200298685 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635420311383 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590237097161 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137324013909 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591349574355 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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