Some people suggest that it is wrong to give money to beggars asking for money on the street, while others think that it is the right thing to do. Which point of view do you think is correct, and why?
People have always been making various opportunities for handling their life which is based on their job and income. As a matter of fact, I agree with the statement that we should not give money to them and I will explicate my reasons in the following paragraphs. First and foremost, help does not mean that give money to people that beg money without any job or any responsibilities. By giving money to them, they will encourage more to beg and make money this way also they do not pay their income taxes and nobody can track them.
Second reason that coming to my mind is when people want to help they can pay money to the chareties and some other institutions that help people in a right way and proper time. In my opinion, it is better to help them by giving them food or job also we may able to refer them to somewhere they can work. For instance, I help one begger in our street to find job as an assembler in my uncle company.
Another noteworthy aspect that should be addressed in this ongoing explanation is nobody like to beg but most of the people like to help and some of the begger know about this human attribute and they use our kindness for making money. For example, I was waching news about this matter 6 month ago and reporter shows that one of this begger can make more than 1000 dollar a day by begging in the downtown NewYork.
To sum up, to give money to begger not only we make them to ask more people and beg more but also, they are not going to improve their life quality and find job. So it is better to do not give them money and consider improve our society in a different way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 147, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a right way" with adverb for "right"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ome other institutions that help people in a right way and proper time. In my opinion, it is b...
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Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...but most of the people like to help and some of the begger know about this human attribute ...
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Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
... I was waching news about this matter 6 month ago and reporter shows that one of this...
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Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
... of this begger can make more than 1000 dollar a day by begging in the downtown NewYor...
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Line 4, column 237, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a different way" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... money and consider improve our society in a different way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, for example, for instance, as a matter of fact, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2614379085 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22882525343 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493464052288 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 417.6 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.8150683714 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.545454545 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8181818182 20.6045352989 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 5.45110844103 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1985851274 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089711434807 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467044873484 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131586623779 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471822262015 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 58.1214874552 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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