It is undeniable fact that humans needs farmland and housing, but it is crucial
to protect deteriorating species of animals. It is Better to save endangered animals because human life is inter linked with other species. Increase land to save wide life habit is basic requirement to maintain balance in ecosystem. It is well known fact that every organism in existence connected with each other for habit and food. For instance, tigers and other carnivores feed on deers, and deer consume green leaves. If there are very few tigers due to lack of adequate sanctuaries, deer population may increase. Moreover, deer compete with other animals or even with human for food. Thus, large number of deer population may lead to destruction of other species. Every organism in the ecosystem play significant role to regulate cycle effectively. For the existence of human it is imperial to save endangered species.Fox serves as good example for controlling population of other species, they consume rodents and rabbits for survival. diminishing number of foxes, can increase number of prey species and in turn will compete with other animals.Furthermore, Many organisms eat dead material and waste from the land and help in reducing land pollution.
On the other hand, there is already plenty of land available for growing grains, pulses and fruits for human consumption and for shelter to satisfy living needs. However, Human existence depends on life of other animals, if valuable species are reducing in numbers, survival of human would be very difficult.
- TPO-24 - Integrated Writing Task Animal fossils usually provide very little opportunity to study the actual animal tissues, because in fossils the animals' living tissues have been largely replaced by minerals. Thus, scientists were very excited recently 76
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- TPO-24 - Integrated Writing Task Animal fossils usually provide very little opportunity to study the actual animal tissues, because in fossils the animals' living tissues have been largely replaced by minerals. Thus, scientists were very excited recently 66
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: interred
...ndangered animals because human life is inter linked with other species. Increase lan...
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...n balance in ecosystem. It is well known fact that every organism in existence co...
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...ers due to lack of adequate sanctuaries, deer population may increase. Moreover, ...
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...er animals or even with human for food. Thus, large number of deer population ma...
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...nd and help in reducing land pollution. On the other hand, there is already plen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, thus, well, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 43.0788530466 19% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 249.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22891566265 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80111773123 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558232931727 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6932556777 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.153846154 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24088934107 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897116417766 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648552634558 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1679743614 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288212710357 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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