"Listen to it then memorize for one week, read it to memorize for one month, look at it to memorize for one year but if you one to understand it for your whole life, do it yourself.” This proverb completely illustrates the importance of actively participating in learning process at classes. In my opinion classes with open discussions are better than those with a lot of lectures.
First of all, when a teacher gives the opportunity of sharing ideas to students, they will try to increase their knowledge and discuss about the topic. For example, at university, I had an organic chemistry course which its professor allowed us to analyze his solutions for different questions. Once he made a mistake and I did not accept it, so we argued about two hours and at last he understood I was right. He announced that the correct answer is different. Then he asserted that it is really good to listen to others’ opinion without bias to amend our errors. Therefore, not only did I memorize that specific question well, but also other pupils tried to propound their beliefs more.
Furthermore, we need to learn how to address later when we enter in the society or work environment. For instance, when I started to work, we had weekly meeting about problems and new decisions that we had to bring up them. I was familiar with this method and could respect others’ view but one of my coworker could not accept opposite comments. Thus, it is crucial to train students how to say their opinions without fighting together.
Admittedly, we need some lectures in classroom by professor, especially if we are not familiar properly with the topic. However, after two or three sessions, we should study more and be independent to find some materials then ask our questions or challenge the concept of books. It helps us learn the research methods and try our best to solve our problems ourselves.
To wrap up, free discussions have a lot of benefits for learning process because make students independent and knowledgeable instead of mentor orientated which is a huge achievement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, really, so, then, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9011299435 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86182730779 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59604519774 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9935977107 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.4375 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.45110844103 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119902330695 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431776770517 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643210689713 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654512428306 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193711504796 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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