Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better?
Opinions vary on whether young should consider independence from their relatives at a young age. Although living with adults promotes the feeling of a so-called “comfort zone,” I dare say that living with their families may detrimentally affect the character of the young.
Undoubtedly, the less responsibility a person takes on his shoulder, the less risk of failure she feels. Thus, living with parents is conjugated with a reduced level of stress and low responsibility, making the life of young much easier. Moreover, some families promote a life like it was several centuries ago, in which the young could live with their parents for the whole life with their kids and wives. This type of family structure made it possible for members to defend themselves and create a family clan, obtaining power in a community.
Nonetheless, living with parents fosters laziness among the young and reduces the young's capabilities to make their own decisions in his life. Most people try to avoid complex tasks and reduce the level of stress in their daily routine. To be specific, my friend's parents developed a strong feeling of dependence from them in his character, so he is unable to deliver an opinion. His parents make choice for him at every point of his life, starting from the choice of a school to obtain a high degree and continuing by choosing his wife. They were making such choices for him until he completely lost his will to grow up.
Equally important, the benefits of life in large families are greatly exaggerated and have several weaknesses. To be specific, the young has her needs to take place as a person since birth, and the world has many examples of people who reached heights with no parents staying behind their back. For example, a well-known genius, Steve Jobs, was able to think creatively and make crucial decisions mostly due to the lack of control from grown-ups in his life. The being on his own let him think «out of the box» and deliver fantastic results, creating Apple Corporation from scratch.
All in all, living independently or with relatives has its positive and negative side effects. The parents may lower the risk of failure of their child. At the same time, excessive control over young adults may detrimentally affect their will and motivation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, thus, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9481865285 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64279689335 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564766839378 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6616805531 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.111111111 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27777777778 5.45110844103 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353726285623 0.236089414692 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111850307324 0.076458572812 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850112602689 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218914304916 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742625603588 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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