Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better?
India is the land of multiple cultures, where families are the integral part of a person's life, in every phase be it marriage, or child birth or first step of a new born. As a Indian, if I were forced to choose, I would definitely prefer to live with my family as long as circumstances allow me to. it is my firm belief that life experiences you learn from your family member is must for sustainability in the out side world, for a number of reasons which I will develope in subsequent paragraphs.
family is the only constant thing in a life of person from birth to adulthood. family is the one who provides a person with all the necessary skill and lessons. The knowledge we gain from older people help us to tackle the problems which we have never faced earlier. For a instance, a boy in his teenage year, starts to drink and smoke heavily. The boy may have started drinking due to peer pressure or some other reasons. His mother notices this quickly and strictly advises him to not fall prey to such bad habits. she shares similar experience with him when she was teenager and how all this bad habits cost her important things in life. The mother talks to other family members and they all decide to help the boy overcome these bad habits. As a result, the boy is now living healthy life away from all the bad habits. if the boy had lived independently, he would not have recovered this easily.
In the light of above mentioned point, I strongly agree with the situation of a young adults living with their families for more longer duration. other than, care and guidance from family members, independence can also be achieved by living with them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ere families are the integral part of a persons life, in every phase be it marriage, or...
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Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...d birth or first step of a new born. As a Indian, if I were forced to choose, I w...
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Line 1, column 411, Rule ID: OUT_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
...ember is must for sustainability in the out side world, for a number of reasons which I ...
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Line 7, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Family
...lope in subsequent paragraphs. family is the only constant thing in a life of...
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Line 7, column 81, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Family
...life of person from birth to adulthood. family is the one who provides a person with a...
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Line 7, column 273, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... which we have never faced earlier. For a instance, a boy in his teenage year, st...
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Line 7, column 519, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...im to not fall prey to such bad habits. she shares similar experience with him when...
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Line 7, column 825, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...lthy life away from all the bad habits. if the boy had lived independently, he wou...
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Line 13, column 125, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'longer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: longer
...g adults living with their families for more longer duration. other than, care and guidance...
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Line 13, column 147, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Other
...heir families for more longer duration. other than, care and guidance from family mem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4474476501 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606666666667 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2289019063 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46666666667 5.45110844103 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256109192768 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774092555514 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826825505656 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196400089749 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116357533071 0.0645574589148 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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