Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Today the whole world is leaning towards independence, whether it's about the country, state or an individual. The topic here suggests something related to it, stating the two major opinions about the current young generation. Some of the adults choose their parents whereas some choose their own freedom.
Each individual might have their own opinions and reasons for deciding a particular way either to live with their parent or to leave them. Both the given situations have pros and cons and an individual's decision might be based only upon those benefits. I think that living with your parents is the better option among the two. Afterall, they are our parents.
The threshold reason to live with your parents is the amount of selfless love you get from your mother and father. In my opinion, it is the best relation possible on entire earth. Starting from the sunrise to going to bed, you are taken care by them every second. Whether you are there or not in front of their eyes, there is an amount of worry and care inside them. It does not matter how old you grow day by day and how old they are getting with time, a child always remains a child for the parents. Whatever profession you are in and anything you are doing in your life, you are a prince or a princess for them every time.
Secondly, from the day you born till the day you are living, they have done everything for you, whether they like it or not. They have made us what we are today. It is a child's basic responsibility to take care of his/her parents when they are not able to do their own work due to age or any reason. But if the child is not there when it is the needed the most, then by my side it is not a good characteristic of a child. Besides thinking about their own personal life and own career, adults should take their parents in consideration, too.
In conclusion, living with your parents makes a family complete and I think that is what love is all about, "you and your parents". Also, the fact that your own child will learn the same thing what you do in your life. So, if an adult wants to live with his/her own children whole life, then he/she should be doing the same.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 233, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...ons about the current young generation. Some of the adults choose their parents whereas som...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hereas some choose their own freedom. Each individual might have their own opi...
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Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: AFTERALL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'after all'?
Suggestion: After all
...nts is the better option among the two. Afterall, they are our parents. The threshold...
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Line 7, column 28, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'bore'?
Suggestion: bore
...ery time. Secondly, from the day you born till the day you are living, they have ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, second, secondly, so, then, whereas, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42118226601 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24010817634 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3945703525 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4761904762 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318270296478 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09211286786 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742581835783 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177645493611 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232305110142 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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