Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that through a quick look at the history of human life, we find out that without people who have the venture of taking a risk and examine new things we could not obtain any of today's developments in science and technology. Contrary to this popular belief, there are still those who argue that taking rise does not make sense because through enough measurement and study on the problem we would be able to do it without any concern. However, I, to a great extent, agree with this idea that successful people try new things and take risks rathere only doing what they know how to do well.
First and foremost, testing a new invention always contain some percents of risk. For example, a new drug for the treatment of cancer, even after this drug passes several animal and experimental tests, would be risky in the first injection on human volunteers. In spite of this fact, we cannot stop to discovery and examine new drugs and treatments because of the presence of some degree of failure and dangerous happens on it. Without this risk progress in medicine will not be possible.
Another significant fact that should be taken into consideration is that sometimes accepting some percent of risk put a person above of others opponents. For instance, I am a stockbroker in the national bank. I have an older and very professional co-worker he earns the highest profit in his business than all of us. The main difference that is made him a phenomenon is that he sees the golden opportunities and takes advantage of it whenever it was along with high risk. However, all other ones preferred to be more careful and do not involve in venture trades.
Finally, yet importantly, in some cases, there is not any safe way to do the job. For example, a firefighter is completely aware of high dangers in a firing building. Notwithstanding, he goes into the fire without consideration about his/ her life. They have saved a lot of individuals in this way that lead to they are exclusively respected by societies because of their courage.
On the basis of reasons that were mentioned above, I am convinced that successful people try new things and take risks. Because testing new ideas required some degrees of risk-taking and risk is a necessary element for success in business, and some types of occupations are joined with risks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
... well. First and foremost, testing a new invention always contain some percents of risk. F...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, look, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in some cases, in spite of, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8058968059 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70172642631 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560196560197 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3563896922 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.666666667 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6111111111 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336345902689 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944944425916 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151649321097 0.0737576698707 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169107562316 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13104780191 0.0645574589148 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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