Communication among people is a very important part of people lives. When we communicate together, we express our emotions, solve our problems, and spend pleasant times together. Some people prefer to communicate through cell phones, e-mails, or personally. I would like personal communication, face to face, because of the following reasons.
To begin with, face to face communication enables us to understand people better and easier. By looking to the facial expressions of people, we can understand their emotions and whether they are satisfied or not about we are talking about. For example...
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No. of Words: 310 350
No. of Different Words: 160 200
Try to put three reasons. and try to make the examples shorter.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 21 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 310 350
No. of Characters: 1408 1500
No. of Different Words: 160 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.196 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.542 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.651 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 96 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 66 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 47 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 25 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.316 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.361 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.579 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.357 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.492 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.22 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5