Different people have distinct views about the funding of universities and college, as many people thought that sports and social activities are essential for a sustainable life along with the academic career. As far as i m concerned, for a secure life of the student the financial support must be more towards the class and libraries and less to the sports, social activities. Universities are considered lofty with the academic of the student as it helps student to broaden their capability and provide a successful path for their future.
First of all, in many universities there must require a good source of internet along with the new technology which assist student to remain up-to-date with the recent inventions and research work. For example, a student if lack of such technology than he might lags behind as being unfamiliar with the new information that has took place in the world. He will remain backward if the university fails to provide required technology. Thus, university must give more emphasis to the libraries. Also, classes of the university is another necessary requirement for any students.
Secondly, the university must be generous in giving the student variety of classes which helps in soaring student's knowledge. Universities should fund on such classes which helps student to uplift their understanding about the world. For example, if the student get variety of classes than it will helps student to cope up with the different aspects in life. It helps student to build up their confident in distinct subjects. Nonetheless, sports and social activities is also beneficial to students.
Admittedly, sports aids the physical and mental balance to student which further helps student to be active and motivated in their daily life. For an instance, a student are loaded with mental pressure of studies so they must need a sports to help them do some recreational activities which help them to be healthy and cheerful. Moreover, social activities is also a part of fun which train student to deal with the different surroundings and people. But, as per the benefits of the classes and libraries are towering as compared to the sports and social activities. Hence, university must funds more on libraries and classes.
In conclusion, the advantage of investing more financial support on libraries and classes overweight the benefits of funding on sports and social activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...iliar with the new information that has took place in the world. He will remain back...
^^^^
Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...riety of classes which helps in soaring students knowledge. Universities should fund on ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 232, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a sport' or simply 'sports'?
Suggestion: a sport; sports
...l pressure of studies so they must need a sports to help them do some recreational activ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21336760925 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8172531948 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452442159383 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.9 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2034522819 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.736842105 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4736842105 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68421052632 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173677476053 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717964262359 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426298129132 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126271841901 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350949204829 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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