TPO-01 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.Use specific reaso

According to my own experience, I believe that a job that doesn't requires travel is better.

When you get a job that require travelling to other places usually you are moving from side to side thus, means more stress, taking flights, buying plane tickets, arriving at the airport on time, making hotel reservations and other things add difficulties or factors that could decrease my job performance.

on the other hand you can not be with your family sometimes because you have to travel. you can miss important dates, birthdays, weddings, births, etc.

For all these reasons, I prefer a job where not have to travel often.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...t could decrease my job performance. on the other hand you can not be with your...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...y sometimes because you have to travel. you can miss important dates, birthdays, we...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 52.1666666667 19% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 534.0 1977.66487455 27% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 107.0 407.700716846 26% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99065420561 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2162214527 4.48103885553 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56303193022 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 212.727598566 38% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.747663551402 0.524837075471 142% => OK
syllable_count: 158.4 618.680645161 26% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.6157191753 48.9658058833 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.8 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0673113460328 0.236089414692 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375688823322 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329944835771 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0343529571521 0.150856017488 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039274142881 0.0645574589148 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 86.8835125448 28% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK

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More content wanted.
Always put a space after punctuation marks. Essay e-grader is sensitive.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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