Life experience shows that telling the truth is the best option in critical situations. The more lie a person says, the more it is likely to get noticed on the surface and disclosed. This also supports my viewpoint because I posit that avoiding lie helps to build early relationships, establish a strong family unity and it also makes your colleagues trust you.
The first argument for telling truth is that it assists in building first relationships in a teenage age. As an illustration, I would exemplify my situation when a painful truth was better than lying. Specifically, the day before meeting with my boyfriend, I took a walk with a friend of mine who was a boy. My boyfriend’s friends noticed me accompanied by some strange man and told it to my boyfriend. When on the following day I saw him, he demanded me to tell the truth about that man. Though I did not see anything bad in going for a walk with a friend, I told everything to my boyfriend and it calmed him down. Thus, whatever a truth would be, it is still better when building early relationship.
Next reason for avoiding lie is about family integrity. When a bride and groom start their family life with being sincere, their happiness will certainly be long. For instance, my mother and father do not hide any secrets from each other. In any unpleasant situation they prefer to tell the truth though it may lead to further conflicts. This has taught me a lot. Assuming that my parents live together for 23 years, I am convinced that telling truth has helped them a lot. Therefore, the truth is essential for a couple that aims to build a strong family.
Last argument for telling the truth deals with the relationships with colleagues at work. Being honest helps any employee to build trust with his or her colleagues. For example, when I was working in a bank, I told my supervisor about an awful mistake that could destroy bank’s relationships with the client. I forgot to send this client a letter about delayed payment on his bill but because I informed mentor about this mistake in time, it could be corrected. Therefore, telling truth in time helps to establish trustful relationships in the working environment.
For these reasons, always telling a truth is better than telling a lie. With regard to my arguments, being sincere helps to strengthen the relationships of the young couple or already married one as well as to establish trust between an employee and his or her colleagues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, as well as, with regard to, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2056.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77030162413 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79012136183 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501160092807 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9676801409 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6666666667 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9583333333 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164814061463 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537554335616 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387618031509 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100342394507 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178403051285 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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