Living in the world that is full of ups and down, it is always difficult to live our lives in accordance with the moral principles of humanity. It becomes a great challenge to always say the truth. However, do you think that it is pertinent to live by these principles? Although some people may dismiss that it is extremely difficult to live up to the expectation of being truthful always, some people do hold a opposite view. I, for one, definitely subscribe that saying the truth is immensely important to humanity.
To begin with, being truthful gains trust among people. This great virtue binds people together which stems from it love, charity, peace and many more. It is an impeccable moral behavior to inculcate in our lives at an early stage which lives on with us. Even though it may not sound plausible, but it is factual that parents who always say the truth tends to have their children depicting this great virtue. My personal experience is a compelling example. When I was a child, my parents groomed all their children with this desirable quality. Accordingly, my parents also mentioned that their parents all brought them up in the same manner. As a result, this same quality springs up from generations to generations and builds a healthy community among their people.
In addition, being truthful draws innumerable unforeseen opportunities. As one lives his or her daily life with this cloak of truthfulness, it gains us integrity and respect from people. People see us as being perfect and always tries to emulate our steps in life. For instance, when I was working in a pharmaceutical company as a research analyst, most of my colleagues accord respect to me not just because of my profound knowledge but greatly to my unshaking ability to always say the truth. While there was an upcoming election for the managerial position of the company, my colleagues vehemently supported me to be the manager due to my competence and principles. Hence, I was astonished to see the extent to which truthfulness in life can excel a person.
In conclusion, it is undoubtedly to say that it is not difficult to live up to this expectation, but notwithstanding, the integrity, trust, respect and unforeseen opportunities keeps us on the path to perfection.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 411, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ng truthful always, some people do hold a opposite view. I, for one, definitely s...
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Line 9, column 198, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eseen opportunities keeps us on the path to perfection.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9296875 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9090942903 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520833333333 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0469779307 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.65 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122829614955 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430016338843 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291859388097 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0720906864912 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312934825353 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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