I strongly agree with the statement. In my own opinion the most important consideration in all relationship is the truth. The truth is an important value for every person; an affective relation cannot survive without emotional security; the infidelities, failures and lost of confidence will finally brake up the strongest relation.
Firstly, could be a long relation if the people are sincere each other. Over time the relationship wears when not all goes well. For example, there are couples, which can forgive an infidelity, in fact almost, forget it, but if the lover fail again to his/her couple maybe wont be a second opportunity, and they brake up. Aside from this it not only could affect the couple even though the member in the family, if this was formed yet. Consequently the hurt is for everyone, kids can be really affected by the break up of parents.
Secondly, rancor is occasioned when a relationship have passed through a desilucion. The connection between both could suddenly be breaking as a result. Despite, a couple that really loves can find the way to overcome, almost everything the suffering is unnecessary. According my point of view, before to provoke or invent a lie, you must analyze all the result as possible. In the normal course of events you can be forgiven, nevertheless the people never hurt who love, whatever the reason.
Finally, lie really is treason. Who really love does not lies. The couple must to questioning if wants to hurt and at the same time give love. This is not possible, generally we want to protect our girlfriend/boyfriend against pain, and this is the true love. Maybe in a relationship can go through a lot of things, as financial problems, disease, but the principal reasons that relationship get cooled is do not telling the truth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 437, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
... in the family, if this was formed yet. Consequently the hurt is for everyone, kids can be r...
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Line 7, column 33, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Who” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...son. Finally, lie really is treason. Who really love does not lies. The couple m...
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Line 7, column 58, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'lie'
Suggestion: lie
...ly is treason. Who really love does not lies. The couple must to questioning if want...
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Line 7, column 407, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...reasons that relationship get cooled is do not telling the truth.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'really', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'as for', 'for example', 'in fact', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.193083573487 0.229887763892 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.158501440922 0.158761421928 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0576368876081 0.0866891130778 66% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0922190201729 0.046263068375 199% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.028818443804 0.0685040099705 42% => OK
Prepositions: 0.100864553314 0.118717715034 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0317002881844 0.0351676179071 90% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.87943913133 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0172910662824 0.0309702414327 56% => OK
Particles: 0.00576368876081 0.00188951952338 305% => OK
Determiners: 0.135446685879 0.0887237588012 153% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0345821325648 0.0209618222197 165% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0230547550432 0.0139019557991 166% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1803.0 2387.08602151 76% => OK
No of words: 303.0 408.028673835 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.9504950495 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48200974243 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.353135313531 0.338922669872 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.254125412541 0.251872472559 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.181518151815 0.174417080927 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.128712871287 0.112833075102 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87943913133 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617161716172 0.524397521467 118% => OK
Word variations: 70.462492534 59.2087087015 119% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.8333333333 20.5533526081 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5566849691 48.84282405 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.166666667 120.699889404 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 20.5533526081 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.944444444444 0.644075263715 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 42.2458745875 45.7405998639 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.16494845361 1.45489161554 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397183152267 0.300154397459 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0681394458773 0.103427244359 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.051836102875 0.0752933317313 69% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.484337378057 0.497263757937 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.1434438104 0.151897553556 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149990548883 0.114077575197 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868600563865 0.0781384742642 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.375081806226 0.336927656856 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0110346979148 0.067059652881 16% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281009440951 0.210909579961 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537944490716 0.0618886996521 87% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.6433691756 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.