Man has got many characteristics. Considering the fact that human being is known as social creature, many of the characteristics have a significant part in his success on the subject of his social life. These traits include honesty, faithfulness, and responsibility to name but a few. Some people believe that always telling the truth is recognized as the most important consideration in any relationship between individuals. Others, conversely, hold the opposite view. I am of the opinion that the first carries more weight. I feel this way for one reason which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, I strongly think that honesty refines or even purifies communities from adverse features of today's society such as deception, cheating, or unfaithfulness thereby contributing to consolidation in relationship between people. From my point of view, if only one attribute is considered to be crucial for a whole generation, what would be, without any little doubt, honesty. Within a family, the importance of truthfulness increases tenfold given the fact that naturally many of the parents' characteristics will be transcribed to their child and the offspring also most often is inclined to imitate their parents' behavior. When it comes to the communications and social affairs, it is evident that people normally tend to establish relations with people regarded as the ones who always tell the truth and needless to say are trusted. There would be no guarantee that individuals immediately trust others any longer, provided that only one case of not telling the truth surfaces. That is why I think it is very important to always tell the truth. To put it another way, people who are recognized as honest ones, tend to opt trusted individuals as their friends, spouse, or co-worker and reject those who cheat, swindle, or deceive others. As a result, unfaithful people gradually will be left alone. Actually, they will fail in both their private and public life.
To cut the long story short, I personally believe that always telling the truth provides people with good opportunities to succeed in their life in terms of finding good friends, marriage and landing a decent job.
By the way, when we can live our life with much greater ease by telling the truth and avoiding lie, why we make it more difficult on purpose by being dishonest?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...her close friend, parent or partner. If ones wife is detected having a tumor, presum...
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Line 3, column 1023, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sease will also encourage her to undergo treatment operations. As this example ha...
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Line 7, column 167, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...nships, it does not mean to stick to it always. There are some cases which it is recom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, talking about, in some cases, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 9.8082437276 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2546.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 494.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15384615385 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86317838947 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481781376518 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 759.6 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7845010379 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 127.3 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 5.45110844103 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10468270215 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414993645572 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03280243899 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0681637339724 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344237209117 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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