Some people believe that telling the truth is only appreciated way for experiencing and having stable relationship, on the other hand, some may prefer to reinforce their relationships by dishonesty and concealing the truth. As,personally I believe that always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Keeping honesty can build trust,which is the basement/function of any kinds of relationship,between people. For example, In my family, we never lie to each other; Therefore we can always trust each other. My parents never locked the money in draws as the other parents often did,instead, they would tell me where could i find money, if I needed to buy something. Compare to my classmates and friends, I have never been afraid to tell my parents the amount and usage of money that I took away. Because I believed that they would not blame me, and If I did something wrong, they would let me know how to do it in a correct way. The trust between us makes the relationship of my family unbreakable.
Next, telling truth can let others be aware of the real situation, which means workers probably avoid serious/severe result in the work as their leader keep an eye on the progress of their work.
Further more, if a person lied once, he would lie more when he faced query, constantly he will be under high pressure,which will do harm to his relationships with others. One a while,my best friend avoided to face me and talk to me,and she kept quite at work too.Finally, it turned out that she lied to her mother about her new boyfriend,and she felt guilty and depressed, so that she didn't want to face anyone around her. Isn't that incredible? Lies will badly influence any relationship.
Based on the above examples,I conclude that, telling truth in any relationship enhance trust in between people,and improves to handle the work in a better way,meanwhile person don't need to invent new stories to keep his lies seem true.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 225, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...by dishonesty and concealing the truth. As,personally I believe that always tellin...
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Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , personally
... dishonesty and concealing the truth. As,personally I believe that always telling the truth...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...people. Keeping honesty can build trust,which is the basement/function of any kinds o...
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Line 2, column 92, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , between
...nt/function of any kinds of relationship,between people. For example, In my family, we n...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , instead
... in draws as the other parents often did,instead, they would tell me where could i find ...
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Line 2, column 319, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...instead, they would tell me where could i find money, if I needed to buy somethin...
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Line 2, column 373, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...if I needed to buy something. Compare to my classmates and friends, I have never ...
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Line 2, column 609, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a correct way" with adverb for "correct"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ng, they would let me know how to do it in a correct way. The trust between us makes the relatio...
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Suggestion: , which
...onstantly he will be under high pressure,which will do harm to his relationships with ...
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Suggestion: , my
...s relationships with others. One a while,my best friend avoided to face me and talk...
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Line 4, column 198, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoided facing'.
Suggestion: avoided facing
...with others. One a while,my best friend avoided to face me and talk to me,and she kept quite at...
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Suggestion: , and
...friend avoided to face me and talk to me,and she kept quite at work too.Finally, it ...
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Suggestion: Finally
...lk to me,and she kept quite at work too.Finally, it turned out that she lied to her mot...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...ed to her mother about her new boyfriend,and she felt guilty and depressed, so that ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d she felt guilty and depressed, so that she didnt want to face anyone around her...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...felt guilty and depressed, so that she didnt want to face anyone around her. Isnt th...
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Suggestion: Isn't
...e didnt want to face anyone around her. Isnt that incredible? Lies will badly influe...
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Line 5, column 28, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...lationship. Based on the above examples,I conclude that, telling truth in any rel...
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Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...tionship enhance trust in between people,and improves to handle the work in a better...
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Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , meanwhile
...roves to handle the work in a better way,meanwhile person dont need to invent new stories ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e work in a better way,meanwhile person dont need to invent new stories to keep his ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88095238095 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99829292891 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598214285714 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9208723292 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.142857143 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173024363793 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750346664723 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902425975946 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103805289749 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750302750005 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.