When a child born, she/he always looking for a similar voice like as another child, and after they are going to kindergarten they find new friend and if they are match together they will be good friends, and that is starting of their friendships, they spend most of the time together and they’re talking about everything without any secrets, also they can be together for along times. So save that old friend is normal way of keeping stable friendships they have.in my opinion, the old friendships are really significant.
First, sometimes the conjunction of friendships is very strong and nobody can Brock it, the same as their family, for example, I had a friend her name was Jila we were as the best friend for 13 years and she was closer to me than my sister, unfortunately I lost her in an accident and after I’m feeling that lose my soul, I mean I lost myself because she was my everything that I’ve ever had, after she left us I’ve never find someone like her.
Second, the new friends couldn’t trust-able and it takes a long time to they know each other. Nowadays most of the people wear a mask and they’ve never show their real features and most of the time they just showoff what they are, and it’s really awful and terrible to meet a new people, for example, after I lost my friend in accident I’m looking for a new friend but I couldn’t because most of them used to say lie. So I couldn’t find that a girl who kind to me like as her.
In conclusion, people should pay attention to their friendships they have because it’s valuable as a gold, and they can be continuing it even they get old and have fun together. I hope all the people spend their time with their reliable friend that have match behavior with them and have enjoyable time together on all situations they’ll have.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, really, second, so, for example, i mean, in conclusion, talking about, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67682926829 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62846609782 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515243902439 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.1344086022 204% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.17871555 48.9658058833 280% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 191.75 100.406767564 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.0 20.6045352989 199% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 5.45110844103 257% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0666310591455 0.236089414692 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383115975032 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0238620639181 0.0737576698707 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0448939881835 0.150856017488 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00785687582641 0.0645574589148 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 11.7677419355 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.1575268817 166% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.0537634409 183% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.247311828 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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