There is no shortage oif debate about whether it is vital to keep your old companions than to make new ones. In my openion, we should not forget our old friends. But, it is equally important to make new friends for several reasons which I explore in the following essay.
First of all, as we grow up things around us for example our school, sometimes our home, teachers, syllubus and jobs etc will change. It is crucial for us to adapt to this change. In addition to this, individuals that we meet in day-to-day activities will also change. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was young, I studied in same school from 1st grade to 10th grade. I had same set of friends throught out this period. But, me and my friends parted our ways when we joined college. Everyone got busy with their life and I have lost contact with most of them. But, I continued talking to one person. But, she was living in different country and we couldn't talk to each other every day and we couldn't share everything with each other since we were living apart. As a result, I had to make new friends at college. I needed someone to asist me during assignments, laboratories and to share my joy and sorrow. I wouldn't have survived in new school without a new companion. For this reason, I strongly believe that it is cardinal to amke new friends.
Secondly, making new friends help us to know people. It will help to enhance our interpersonal skills such as communication and listening etc. We will need our friends help in various points of life. For instance, my cousin recently graduatedand and she was looking for a job. She has a lot of friends who are working in various firms and many of them refered her in thier companies. As a result, she has currently three to four job offeres. Also, when she moved to another city for job, one of her friends moved in with her in her apartment. She didn't have to go through the process of searching jobs or finding the right roommate which other people usually go through. All of this would not have been possible if she had not made new friends.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that it is very important to make new friends as our environment changes. This is because friends play crucial role in various aspects of our lives and they make our life much easier.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ories and to share my joy and sorrow. I wouldnt have survived in new school without a n...
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...moved in with her in her apartment. She didnt have to go through the process of searc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1896.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50356294537 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47312784516 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527315914489 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8365231259 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.7142857143 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0357142857 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.96428571429 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174256944022 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521039129569 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556975608181 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135527729522 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802311164097 0.0645574589148 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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