In the current emerging world, communication between the people has been increased every day and people more relay on each other. The friendship is paying a vital role in communication between the people. In other words, friendship is the god,s gift to the society to built the better relationship between people. Some believe it is important to hold old friend and others not. In my view, I feel an old friend should get a priority, compare to creating new friends because they are very supportive and more trust.
First and foremost, an old friend is more supportive. If the friend is close and old, they become a family after the certain period. As a result, we share everything as a household. For example, when I was studying Pharmacy at Texas state university, my family arranged my sister wedding. Since I am having the final exams, I requested my close friend Princy to take care of the function. She was really helped me a lot and fulfilled my duties. All this only possible because she knew me since I was in high school.
Second, if the friend is very close, we have more trust in each other. The honesty is the key to building a strong friendship and it is only possible with trust. If I am having the trust in my friend, I share all my personals and vice versa. For an instant, when I was studying for my Master's Degree, I almost stayed for one year at my friend house. Most of the time I stay alone because as a part of the business he travel's a lot. In view of the fact that, he is having the trust in me that's why he allowed me to stay alone in his home and I stand for that.
In conclusion, holding old friend always built trust and care and support.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , s
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...fact that, he is having the trust in me thats why he allowed me to stay alone in his ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, really, second, so, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39677419355 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46415509938 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51935483871 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.5594467577 48.9658058833 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.7368421053 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3157894737 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57894736842 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100095330635 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378218550748 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456154941116 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759131935587 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291315634354 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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