In today's world, cars are the most essential part of our transportation system. Some people believe that in twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today because there are possibilities that there would be other better transportation vehicles than cars. However, in my opinion, I believe that cars will not be out of date ever and in twenty years they will be as important as it is today. In fact, I think there will be more cars in use than it is today for the following three reasons.
First of all, with the growth of population, there will be needed more cars for their transportation. For example, the population on the earth is increasing every day. And in twenty years there will be more people than there is today on earth. In that case, their necessity for cars will increase the number of cars in use. From my own experience, ten years ago, my family had only one car but today we have a bigger family and we have three cars.
The second reason why I think the number of cars in use will increase is the advancement in technology. With the advancement of technology, cars are now more affordable and available to people. It's easier to drive now than it was before. And it is advancing towards newer and newer technologies. Someday we might have cars that will not need a driver, a self-driving car. Last week I saw a video on the internet where a group of people already made a prototype of a self-driving car. It was so cool. I don't know what technology is yet to come next in twenty years.
Finally, today's economy is better than it was before. More people are becoming economically stable and can afford to buy a car. People who are not rich but earning enough are now able to buy a car. Also, the price of cars is now much lesser than it was before. For instance, the price of the Toyota Corolla X was so high back in its time. Now one can have it for less than half of its original price.
In conclusion, I think in twenty years there will be more cars in use than there are today for these above reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 503, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, second, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37270341207 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47627467456 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44094488189 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7302851749 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4166666667 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.875 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295489872595 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961277472543 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.092210805122 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203692006087 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0958830027836 0.0645574589148 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 11.7677419355 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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