Most of people want to have convience in life, one out of many things that makes life eay is car.
I disagree with statement "In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than are today"
I think this for couple of reasons, I would like to list few of those. Car prices are continuously reducing,
people don't want to reply on public transport and with continuous improvement in technology makes people to buy new
cars.
First off, with contiuos reduction in car prices, it has become possible for average income family to buy car.
Few years back car prices were very high and buying car was only possible for rich people,having car was privileage that time.
Now with distributed business manufacturing cost is going down, due to this car price are continuously reducing.
Secondly, people do not want to rely on public transport. I think nowadays everyone want things to be done before/on time.
This is due to fact that if you miss the time you have to face the consequesces. For example, one of my friend
was few minute late for his job interview, but company did not allow him to interview and he missed that opportunity.
I think this demand being punctual at all events is going to increase in future.
Finally, with growing reasearch engineer are developing more technology advanced cars. I have read that now engineers are
working on car which can fly, they have developed sample for it. I think in recent future these car will soon be in market.
Who will not want to buy something awesome like this?
In conclusion, with all reasons I discussed above I think in future cars will be used more but not less than today.
This is due to fact that people want convience in their life which does come with car.
- TPO 25 , Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities. 71
- In order to get healthy should people exercise more or sleep more? 60
- Do you think that seeing violence in video games and movies causes people to behave violently? 73
- TPO-22 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 66
- TPO-21 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your ans 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
Most of people want to have convience in life, one out...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ices are continuously reducing, people dont want to reply on public transport and w...
^^^^
Line 9, column 90, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , having
...ng car was only possible for rich people,having car was privileage that time. Now wit...
^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 71, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...tual at all events is going to increase in future. Finally, with growing reasearch eng...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 18, column 91, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this car' or 'these cars'?
Suggestion: this car; these cars
...sample for it. I think in recent future these car will soon be in market. Who will not w...
^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'for example', 'i think', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244897959184 0.229887763892 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.204081632653 0.158761421928 129% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0816326530612 0.0866891130778 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0495626822157 0.046263068375 107% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0553935860058 0.0685040099705 81% => OK
Prepositions: 0.128279883382 0.118717715034 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0408163265306 0.0351676179071 116% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.5170803596 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0408163265306 0.0309702414327 132% => OK
Particles: 0.00583090379009 0.00188951952338 309% => OK
Determiners: 0.0349854227405 0.0887237588012 39% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0174927113703 0.0209618222197 83% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0116618075802 0.0139019557991 84% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1745.0 2387.08602151 73% => OK
No of words: 306.0 408.028673835 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70261437908 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48200974243 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.274509803922 0.338922669872 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.183006535948 0.251872472559 73% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.153594771242 0.174417080927 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.104575163399 0.112833075102 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5170803596 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562091503268 0.524397521467 107% => OK
Word variations: 59.6811145673 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.870794633 48.84282405 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.647058824 120.699889404 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.588235294118 0.644075263715 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.5376344086 353% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 36.3006535948 45.7405998639 79% => OK
Elegance: 1.33962264151 1.45489161554 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264286417209 0.300154397459 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.08344308418 0.103427244359 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0619131990593 0.0752933317313 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.821037417444 0.497263757937 165% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.215574257562 0.151897553556 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966820370181 0.114077575197 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886885100716 0.0781384742642 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.0680162225152 0.336927656856 20% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0518934284711 0.067059652881 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104377530311 0.210909579961 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111189338728 0.0618886996521 180% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
---------------------
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.