Yes, I agree the statement which says that today people are doing things as they like rather than what they are supposed to do. I want to explore few events which is really happening in the day today activities in the world specially in my country.
First, the teacher job is to teach the subject to student but after entering to the job they forget the professional ethics, duty and responsibilities. For example, in my town there is on government school, here teacher coming to the school around 10 o' clock but they are supposed to come to school 8 am. Further, they are talking and texting to the family members during the class hours which is radical. Further, the student also will follow these unwanted activities in their future which not appropriate for the good citizen of India.
Secondly, doctors are the next to the god according to the Indian culture but they are becoming more commercial than service oriented which some times leads very big disaster in emergency situation. For example, doctors are must exam the patient at least 20 minutes per patient. Here, they are just seeing the for one or two minutes and prescribing high does antibiotic without confirming the bacterial growth test. This exercise should be eliminate for public health.
Thirdly, Layer, they duty is to protect laws and regulations. Instead of that they taking side for those who offer more money regardless of crime activities of the client which spoil the entire society. They are not supposed to think about their own benefits.
Fourth, police man, their duty is supposed to work throughout the day whether they are in crime branch or in civil or traffic but what is happening here?. they are allowing the bar to run after 11 pm which is unethical and they are going to their house during night duty, leaving the station just like that. Further, always says for excuses to some cases like your not comes under the police station control and you should go the nearest station, not here. During emergency situation they are not supposed to behave like that they consider the humanity, not more rationalisation.
Finally, the politician duty is to keep people very safe and secure manner. Till the election they back up public, once they won in the election they forget about their commitments which they made during election period. Like these all the people doing the activities what they want rather what they supposed to do.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 441, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'eliminated'?
Suggestion: eliminated
...al growth test. This exercise should be eliminate for public health. Thirdly, Layer,...
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Line 13, column 156, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...or traffic but what is happening here?. they are allowing the bar to run after 11 pm...
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Line 15, column 317, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y want rather what they supposed to do.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'really', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'at least', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.221978021978 0.229887763892 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.18021978022 0.158761421928 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0549450549451 0.0866891130778 63% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0615384615385 0.046263068375 133% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0703296703297 0.0685040099705 103% => OK
Prepositions: 0.101098901099 0.118717715034 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0483516483516 0.0351676179071 137% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.42213208645 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.043956043956 0.0309702414327 142% => OK
Particles: 0.0021978021978 0.00188951952338 116% => OK
Determiners: 0.0857142857143 0.0887237588012 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00879120879121 0.0209618222197 42% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0285714285714 0.0139019557991 206% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2452.0 2387.08602151 103% => OK
No of words: 414.0 408.028673835 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.92270531401 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.330917874396 0.338922669872 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.234299516908 0.251872472559 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.149758454106 0.174417080927 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0797101449275 0.112833075102 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42213208645 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531400966184 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 60.3953825242 59.2087087015 102% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.7 20.5533526081 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9900973939 48.84282405 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.6 120.699889404 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 20.5533526081 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.644075263715 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 44.1299516908 45.7405998639 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.19014084507 1.45489161554 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288362355776 0.300154397459 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0882789805158 0.103427244359 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0558690216389 0.0752933317313 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.568244603876 0.497263757937 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.128788269099 0.151897553556 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120190857927 0.114077575197 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845570963016 0.0781384742642 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.35763397622 0.336927656856 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.06339550775 0.067059652881 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193486485802 0.210909579961 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633400170625 0.0618886996521 102% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.