People always are interested in making judgements about the quality of their life and comparing today’s quality with long past. There is a controversy among different people about whether life is now easier and more comfortable or it was several decades ago. Although this industrial world causes new widespread problems for people such as new diseases, global warming and noise pollution, technology provides all people around the world with easier and more comfortable life. The utmost important reasons include the improvement in health care and transportation, as well as the revolution created by electricity. Lines below shed more light on the issue put forward.
The first and foremost advantage of today’s life is state-of-the-art hospitals and health services. Although some diseases such as HIV are related to contemporary life, many of the past serious illnesses, now, could be cured. Many of the people who had fallen terminally ill, had been suffering unbearable pain and wished to be cured at that time, would not believe that a day their illnesses would be as simple as catching a cold. Also, today, if somebody fell terminally ill, the experienced doctors would prescribe some tablets and they would alleviate his or her pain. All of these improvements in health and drug make the lives more comfortable and easier than it was in the past.
Furthermore, the new means of transportation make life more and more comfortable. As a case in point, our grandfathers had to travel a long distance by horses to visit a city, or fight against a country. It is crystal clear that, now, people travel by many fast means of transportation such as luxury automobiles, fast trains, etc. and also, they fight against other countries by fighter planes. Also, our grandparents who had become ill, had to go to other cities, in which health services had been improved, by carriages. However, now, people would travel abroad by train quickly so that they could cure their serious illnesses. Actually, the easier trip, the more comfortable life.
Last but not least, electricity has major positive impacts on life. For instance, our grandparents had to burn wood to provide light, heat and food. But now, just by pressing a key all parts of a house will be bright. Also, many houses are provided with heat by a piece of electrical equipment. In addition, many of appliances in kitchen use electricity. Electricity, also, has an influence on industrialization. It is true that industry causes noise pollution, but, on the other hand, it provides many other advantages such as much less labor, by automation, economic development, etc. Each of which makes life easier for new generation.
To sum up, by taking all into account, it can wholeheartedly be alleged that today’s life is more comfortable and easier than the previous generations although some problems are allocated to the present. Of course, this claim is fully guaranteed by improvements in medicine, transportation and new sources of energies. On no account is it right that the next generations will face serious challenges of outweighing the advantages and disadvantages of technology and industry and their influences on the quality of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for instance, in addition, of course, such as, as well as, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2702.0 1977.66487455 137% => OK
No of words: 522.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17624521073 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77988695657 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01691234598 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503831417625 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 833.4 618.680645161 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7718775607 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82142857143 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137236446913 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417930476701 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495779702206 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829724127163 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319161560018 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 86.8835125448 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes. We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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