The world has witnessed huge developments in all aspects of life during this century. Some people would argue that life is easier at the present time, while others may consider the opposite point of view. In my opinion, nowadays, life is much comfortable than it was at the time of our grandparents. I will explore the reason for my stance in the following lines.
To begin with, the advancement in the health care system and new discoveries of medicines made our life more convenient. The health system and drugs industry provided us with more chances of better treatment and longer expectancy of life. It goes without saying that the leap in the medical sector is significant. For instance, we have better diagnosing tools and machines that can predict diseases even before it happen. Moreover, the quality of hospitals and the centers of treatment became much far better. Mayo clinic, one of the most high-ranked medical institution in the world, has published research that indicates the life expectancy of people in the US have raised by 5 years and they are expecting to reach 8 years in the few coming years. This due to the fact that medicine and health care progressed on all aspects.
Furthermore, the communication methods made life much easier, and saved both time and effort. It is beyond the shadow of doubt that reaching and contacting with friends or relatives has never been so easy as it is these days. The Internet, mobile phones and all the other technical telecommunication methods provides us with myriad ways to contact and interact with each other. For instance, it is now possible to send an Email in seconds to finish important job, which makes performing tasks more efficient. Personally, I depend mainly on mobile phones or the Internet to manage my work or even contact family and friends.
In conclusion, I believe that life now is more comfortable than it was the past. This is attributed to the fact that we have the progress in the medical sector and the easy ways of communications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 415, Rule ID: SEND_AN_EMAIL[1]
Message: Consider using 'email'.
Suggestion: email
...er. For instance, it is now possible to send an Email in seconds to finish important job, whi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89534883721 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74430306215 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558139534884 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6320087332 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5555555556 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150135993758 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465178993615 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479031233962 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946701663797 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193100532532 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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