When we look back on the old days that human beings had passed, we are amazed by the tremendous development that we made. Seeing all the things we possess today, comparing to the former generations, indeed, life is easier and more comfortable today rather than the days when our grandparents were children. I would like to reinforce my opinion from following aspects.
First of all, we live in a world that is so peaceful that had never appeared before. Decades ago, peace is such a desirable word for people around the world that they can only make dreams of it day and night. When I was a little girl, my grandmother always liked to tell me stories that happened in her childhood. She said that they always had to settle from one place to another to find a secure place to shelter. Moreover, every night they went to sleep with the companion of sound unuttered by gun or some other weapons. It seems that the world was entirely colored by blood. The society is chaotic and people are all thrown in wholly panic and horror. Every time when my grandmother told this kind of things, I can feel her sorrow and there always tears in her eyes. How fortunate we are to be born in such a peace time that we don't need to bother with our security of life.
On the other hand, we enjoy a much higher quality of life than our grandparents do. Several years ago it is a crucial problem to fill people's stomach. Even millions of people starve to death. While today we have a large quantity species of food to choose,and there also careful parents who schedule the nutritious food table for us. Not only can we have enough food to eat, but also live in a healthier life style. Furthermore, there were not many recreations before, nowadays we have the access of computer, TV and some other kind of high technical products. Via these things, we can retain a colorful and vigorous life. For instance, if we miss some friends far away, we just need to make a phone call to contact with him/her instead of writing a long letter which would cost you several days even weeks. For another example, we traveled distance by foot before that was so fatigue while today we can by car or even by plane to far far away. Obviously, life becomes easier and more comfortable than generations ago.
In conclusion, today people own more happiness than before. Life is so decent and superb. As far as I am concerned, nowadays the only thing we need to do is that we should learn to cherish what we have possessed and endeavor to improve our society to a better world to live in. All people around the world should hand in hand to build a harmonious world
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: don't
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Suggestion: , and
...large quantity species of food to choose,and there also careful parents who schedule...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: far
...today we can by car or even by plane to far far away. Obviously, life becomes easier an...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'so', 'while', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'first of all', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.212523719165 0.229887763892 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.153700189753 0.158761421928 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0777988614801 0.0866891130778 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0777988614801 0.046263068375 168% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0815939278937 0.0685040099705 119% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111954459203 0.118717715034 94% => OK
Participles: 0.022770398482 0.0351676179071 65% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.37033177484 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0436432637571 0.0309702414327 141% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0777988614801 0.0887237588012 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0189753320683 0.0209618222197 91% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0208728652751 0.0139019557991 150% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2621.0 2387.08602151 110% => OK
No of words: 479.0 408.028673835 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47181628392 5.86048508987 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.281837160752 0.338922669872 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.192066805846 0.251872472559 76% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.114822546973 0.174417080927 66% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0730688935282 0.112833075102 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37033177484 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528183716075 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 62.7081613848 59.2087087015 106% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.4230769231 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6781854674 48.84282405 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.807692308 120.699889404 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4230769231 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.538461538462 0.644075263715 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 37.6297575076 45.7405998639 82% => OK
Elegance: 1.10909090909 1.45489161554 76% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244862028518 0.300154397459 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.083695567512 0.103427244359 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0684587806103 0.0752933317313 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.402337537786 0.497263757937 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.147155427631 0.151897553556 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879522111902 0.114077575197 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614499634862 0.0781384742642 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.350691758749 0.336927656856 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0356800865948 0.067059652881 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181651107698 0.210909579961 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289924235826 0.0618886996521 47% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 15.0 8.42114695341 178% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.6433691756 161% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.