In this era, people are certainly live better than those live when my grandparents were children.
To begin with, since the agricultural techniques are developed rapidly, food supply is much more than that those old days. When my grandparents were children, my country was just builtded up after a great war not long ago. Foods belong to plantation owners or so. Thus, it so hard in my hometownto maintain a stable food supply for one ordinary family that they need to think various ways for survival. On the other hand, look at us, we can buy anything from the supermarkets if we have money. Meanwhile, everybody could earn for themselves relatively easily and few people would worry about the fundamental supplies like foods.
Furthermore, it is easy to imagine what the house in my grandparents' days looked like. After a war most houses are broken, and people must huddle together in a small room to live. While today, the skyscrapers are built side by side, and people can choose freely where they live; high or low, urban or suburban. Even though the price of the house is so unbelievable, there are enough room that could hold more and more people. It's not such a difficulty like in those past days that even you have money but you still cannot own a house.
Besides, except the foods and living place, the transportation is also developed day by day. People could travel to almost all the cities at any time and any place if they have a car. The turnpikes connect the country's cities and even expand to other countries. On the contrary, the people in my grandparents' era suffer a lot to go to other cities, not only because of the cost of time and money, but also because sometimes there is no way! And in fact, the journey couldn't be comfortable for those people, since most of the transports didn't supply air-conditions as well as foods and sofas.
In conclusion, considering the foods, the houses and the transportation conditions, the live today is easier and more comfortable than it was in my grandparents' days.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: worry about
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the transports') or simply say ''most transports''.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, look, so, still, thus, well, while, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77337110482 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68074299515 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57507082153 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.888728573 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1176470588 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7647058824 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.29411764706 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121308918678 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407433610833 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526216282814 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932367353048 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568433475597 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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