I agree with the statement that life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when my grand parents were children. I have tow reasons to agree to that statement. First reason is advancement in technology in fields like medical, transport and others. The second reason is inventions in the field of artificial intelligence. These are reasons which I would be explaining it in detail in the further part of essay with some instances.
I have herd some instances by my grand parents that they had faced when they were young. A similar instance if we face today we have lot many solutions in a moment. One instance is once my grand father fell down and got a fracture. In his village, there were no doctors who neither had an X-ray machine to detect a fracture nor they were good enough to diagnose the wound and tell that it was a fracture. For this he had to travel more than twenty kilometers to a city to find a sophisticated hospital to get his wound diagnosed. For this my grandpa waited a day and the next day he got his wound diagnosed. But today with with advancement in technology, the transportation is made easy. Not only the transportation, but also nowadays, small hospitals have started using X-ray machines which will be helpful for the quick check. This has made life easier.
My second reason is greater advancement in the field of artificial intelligence. This can shortly stated as invention of new brilliant devices. For example, an MRI scanning would scan the whole body and would report the diseases present in the body. Or take for example, the microwave ovens. Within few minutes, we can have our meals ready. I remember my granny saying instance that their parents use to take more than an hour to cook a meal. But today, the invention of the oven has made the life of a woman easier, simpler and more sophisticated. Especially for a working woman, she would get more time with these sort of equipment. Not only for woman, even for me, many devices like trimmers, shavers save their time.
These are reasons why I feel life today is more easier than it was for our grand parents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: herded
...of essay with some instances. I have herd some instances by my grand parents that...
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Suggestion: with
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Suggestion: state
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Suggestion: used
...anny saying instance that their parents use to take more than an hour to cook a mea...
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...ing woman, she would get more time with these sort of equipment. Not only for woman, even ...
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Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...se are reasons why I feel life today is more easier than it was for our grand parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, as for, for example, i feel, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65066666667 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61098670153 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517333333333 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0234018163 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6666666667 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.625 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 5.45110844103 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192006797315 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629565187188 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893740557252 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159492663476 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856867344668 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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