Today, a lot of people use internet because it can prepare fast and cheap way for comunications as well as science. Some people say that internet provides people with a lot of valubale informations. however other think access to much information creates problems. In my view, the advantages of using internet is far more than its disadventages.
First, Internet can prepare a cheap way for comunication between people in the society. There are many alternative ways in comunicating with people arround the world but all of them are now outmoded according to presence of internet. For example, when I was at the graduate level I hadn't much mony in my purse to spend on the my mobile phone utility service so that I arranged online communication with my family. Because in that time our dormitory had internet free using policy internet connection provided me a cheap and almost high speed way to comunicate with my parents.
Second, Internet is very fast today that can facilitate the life around the world. Previously, people used letters or travelled from one place to another to send their massages but now high speed internet such as 4G and Wimax is almost available in all countries. For instance, When I was preparing my papers for an international conference there were many people who were inhabitant in different part of the world, The corresponding university handled the problem with using video conference method. Despite the people were from different countrees, I had a chance to speek about their works and presentation online. Moreover there are many type of communications such as Skype that can prepare an alternative to the trivial phone cals that people used to interact with each other.
Third, internet connection that is used in community can enhance the relationship beteen people that are far apart from each other. Social networks are the most trivial usages that are availeble because of the internet connection. For example, I have many friends that are farther in the other cities. Since They have access to social groups, I can manage meeting and discussions with them. Despite many people beleive social groups can destract people from doing their works and enhance I beleive they are the best way to enhance the reationship between people in the society.
In conclusion, many beleive there are many problems in using Internet, theuy can prepare the cheap way as well as fast way for all people to interact with each other. Social networks are the best example of using internet in the social life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...le with a lot of valubale informations. however other think access to much information ...
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Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hadn't
...ple, when I was at the graduate level I hadnt much mony in my purse to spend on the m...
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Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'my'?
Suggestion: the; my
...hadnt much mony in my purse to spend on the my mobile phone utility service so that I ...
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Line 3, column 449, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mily. Because in that time our dormitory had internet free using policy internet ...
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Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: MASSAGE_MESSAGE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'messages'?
Suggestion: messages
...from one place to another to send their massages but now high speed internet such as 4G ...
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Line 5, column 283, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ble in all countries. For instance, When I was preparing my papers for an interna...
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Line 5, column 620, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ut their works and presentation online. Moreover there are many type of communications s...
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Line 5, column 639, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun type seems to be countable; consider using: 'many types'.
Suggestion: many types
...presentation online. Moreover there are many type of communications such as Skype that ca...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'third', 'well', 'apart from', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as well as', 'in my view']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.265350877193 0.229887763892 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.140350877193 0.158761421928 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105263157895 0.0866891130778 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0416666666667 0.046263068375 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0548245614035 0.0685040099705 80% => OK
Prepositions: 0.138157894737 0.118717715034 116% => OK
Participles: 0.0263157894737 0.0351676179071 75% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69319129497 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0263157894737 0.0309702414327 85% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0833333333333 0.0887237588012 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0175438596491 0.0209618222197 84% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0197368421053 0.0139019557991 142% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2539.0 2387.08602151 106% => OK
No of words: 422.0 408.028673835 103% => OK
Chars per words: 6.01658767773 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.364928909953 0.338922669872 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.267772511848 0.251872472559 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.177725118483 0.174417080927 102% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.101895734597 0.112833075102 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69319129497 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46682464455 0.524397521467 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.9307140937 59.2087087015 86% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.1 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9992447857 48.84282405 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.95 120.699889404 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 0.644075263715 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.54480286738 144% => OK
Readability: 47.8772511848 45.7405998639 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.81481481481 1.45489161554 125% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30568474892 0.300154397459 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.116869982852 0.103427244359 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0839142542712 0.0752933317313 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.515780448665 0.497263757937 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.124263764191 0.151897553556 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131188068862 0.114077575197 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071732064506 0.0781384742642 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.424176075046 0.336927656856 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0414969722825 0.067059652881 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224482974968 0.210909579961 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0873863763169 0.0618886996521 141% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.