In the modern world, the internet give a great support for people to find information in anything, such as day-to-day life, and education. Internet is the one of the best invasions done by the human brain. In my opinion, I strongly believe that internet provides us valuable information. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, in our day-to-day life, internet gives us a lot of help to give any solution. We come across different problems daily in our lives, however, the internet provide information that gives solutions in less amount of time. The only thing we need to do is type our question or need in the search bar and the internet will provide lots of solutions via millions of websites. My own experience is a good example of it. When I saw scratch on my new wood furnished floor, I was feeling terrible and did not know what to do. Then tried to rub it off with water and other chemicals, but neither worked. Then I searched in the internet, to find any solution and I found many. Then I followed the steps according to internet and it worked and the scratch was gone. So, that is how internet helped me to find the correct information in the correct time.
Secondly, in the field of education, internet gives a vast support to students in school and colleges. During, our education we will get lots of objectives, such as assignments, exams and researches. The internet can give the correct information in a small amount of time and the information is very accurate. For, example, if a student in a college has the final examination and needs to do studying, but if the student does not have enough resources, it will take time to find the correct books from the library. Therefore, the student can search up in the internet the things needed and can find the correct information accurately.
In conclusion, the internet has every single information people need and it can give the correct information accurately in seconds, which can save up our time as well. That is why nowadays, people always depend on the internet to fine their information.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...and it worked and the scratch was gone. So, that is how internet helped me to find the c...
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...e internet to fine their information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, i feel, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71313672922 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70162282592 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504021447721 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4707886226 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.65 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181750245108 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595894365015 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344817988802 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124845006819 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308158561506 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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