The Internet is widely access around the world and provides us lots of information. Whether the information creates more benefits or problem is a hotly debated. Some contend that the internet has a great impact on the people since they can get any book that they want within a few mints, and help the people for getting any information they need. However, I think this information that we get from the internet would give us more problems than benefits. Information could make students lazier when doing their works, give teenage access to the depraved website or even be incorrect.
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Essay evaluation report
a student who constantly using Wikipedia
a student who is constantly using Wikipedia
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 27 15
No. of Words: 533 350
No. of Characters: 2618 1500
No. of Different Words: 267 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.805 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.912 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.585 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 190 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 146 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 106 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 50 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.741 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.456 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.481 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.277 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.484 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.117 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The Internet is widely access around the...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...depraved website or even be incorrect. To begin with, in the age of techno...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ent to practice the act of plagiarism. Secondly, as teenage starting to hi...
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Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e, making them sexually active. However, the teenager who hasn't reached the...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m easily accessible for the teenager. Finally, information on the web is ...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... can not be considered as trustworthy. As all thins considered, while the inter...
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Line 9, column 49, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun benefit seems to be countable; consider using: 'many benefits'.
Suggestion: many benefits
...hins considered, while the internet has many benefit such as facilitating the communication ...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nto account before using the Internet.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think', 'such as', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239530988275 0.229887763892 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.155778894472 0.158761421928 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0536013400335 0.0866891130778 62% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0636515912898 0.046263068375 138% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0502512562814 0.0685040099705 73% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112227805695 0.118717715034 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0435510887772 0.0351676179071 124% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7157575633 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0201005025126 0.0309702414327 65% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.120603015075 0.0887237588012 136% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0234505862647 0.0209618222197 112% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0100502512563 0.0139019557991 72% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3258.0 2387.08602151 136% => OK
No of words: 531.0 408.028673835 130% => OK
Chars per words: 6.13559322034 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80035803286 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.376647834275 0.338922669872 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.286252354049 0.251872472559 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.220338983051 0.174417080927 126% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.122410546139 0.112833075102 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7157575633 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508474576271 0.524397521467 97% => OK
Word variations: 61.2981274391 59.2087087015 104% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6684587814 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.6666666667 20.5533526081 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0315945973 48.84282405 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.666666667 120.699889404 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.5533526081 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.555555555556 0.644075263715 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.54480286738 144% => OK
Readability: 48.2919020716 45.7405998639 106% => OK
Elegance: 1.46583850932 1.45489161554 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29367362463 0.300154397459 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101873715282 0.103427244359 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0592004603424 0.0752933317313 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.51965572796 0.497263757937 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.10779997687 0.151897553556 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108230336102 0.114077575197 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452103063924 0.0781384742642 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.425426891802 0.336927656856 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0507293819564 0.067059652881 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201444752193 0.210909579961 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480502926139 0.0618886996521 78% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.86379928315 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.4623655914 284% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 24.0 13.6433691756 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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