People have always been concerned about their education. Some people think that it is better to be expert in one major and the rest of them think otherwise. Each way has advantages and disadvantages. I personally believe that, being professional in one major is better than study a little bit about many fields.
First and foremost, having enough focus is important in education, so people have been looked for ways to increase their focus. Scientists in Irvine University found out that the best way to increase the focus is paying attention to fewer subjects. They published the result in the website of the university in 2010.
Second, society will have more professionals and mediocre people will not ruin everything. Imagine a society with many people. In a region with a large population, it is important to have many experts in varieties of majors instead of having many educated people, who has not enough knowledge and experience in a specific field. For example, wages are high in some countries such as Iran, so people prefer to do things by their selves instead of hiring another person to do it. In this situation, everybody has a minimum knowledge in many subjects, but nobody is not that professional. Consequently, in huge problems, they will have serious issues, because they have not enough information about that area.
Last but not least, people would be more satisfied in their favorite major. As a matter of fact, each person is good at something and also bad at something else. In multi-task societies, people have to learn many things. Therefore, some of those areas are not their favorite and they are bad at those. In this situation, people would not be happy or satisfied with their life, because they have to do something that they do not love and there is a big possibility to do it wrong. In both cases, they will be disappointed.
To sum up, although knowing a little bit about everything seems nice for some people, it is not pleasant in real and it has too many disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 283, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...nal in one major is better than study a little bit about many fields. First and foremo...
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Line 5, column 512, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'minimum knowledge'.
Suggestion: minimum knowledge
...do it. In this situation, everybody has a minimum knowledge in many subjects, but nobody is not tha...
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Line 9, column 31, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...nted. To sum up, although knowing a little bit about everything seems nice for some pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, look, second, so, therefore, as to, for example, such as, as a matter of fact, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86666666667 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70808105558 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504347826087 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4647051042 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.95 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134717932109 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422158207944 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444617293689 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0695792382253 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046734877723 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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