Everyone has their own personal preferences to travel and reasons to visit a particular place. But is it incorrect to travel abroad and see the world or is it necessary that people are only benefited from traveling in their own country? Well, there are many people who think this way. However, I do not agree with this and want to visit to foreign countries and explore all the beautiful places around the world.
Firstly, traveling in other country enhances one’s knowledge and helps in becoming a more social person. When an individual goes to a new country, it is obvious that she/he will learn about that place and its rich culture. Also, during traveling one will always come in contact with the local people of that place and get an opportunity to interact and be friends with them. This not only increases the joy of traveling but it is indeed a fantastic experience. I can say this firmly because of my own experience. When I went to USA last year, I was astonished to see the diverse culture of that place. It was absolutely a memorable trip because I could see some of the incredible places in the world and made some really good friends there. It not helped me in traveling but it also gave me a chance to get an insight look of their real life, which made me more sensitive towards those people. As a result, after coming back I was more friendly and supportive to foreigners coming to see India.
Secondly, I think it is also necessary as it makes a person courageous and bold, which is mandatory in today’s world to get success. As we all know, life is tough and unpredictable, where one will have to face many challenges and should know the ways to overcome the difficulties and win in every situation. I strongly believe that it is very feasible to see one’s own country at any time but it needs a lot of courage and boldness to go to a strange country as one can encounter various problems such as finding destination, choosing a correct way to travel from one place to another, searching good places to eat and many more. This is a lifetime experience that teaches a person to face any problem and to become fearless.
To recapitulate, I would like to mention that although seeing one’s own country is must to know about our own rich and glorious culture but to become wiser and confident, it is necessary to visit foreign countries to have new experiences and to learn from unexpected incidents. Moreover, world is beautiful, it would not be fair to confine oneself to a small place when one can enjoy seeing the various spectacular places.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...us problems such as finding destination, choosing a correct way to travel from on...
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Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...though seeing one's own country is must to know about our own rich and glorious cu...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y seeing the various incredible places.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'i think', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.160243407708 0.229887763892 70% => OK
Verbs: 0.186612576065 0.158761421928 118% => OK
Adjectives: 0.111561866126 0.0866891130778 129% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0507099391481 0.046263068375 110% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0730223123732 0.0685040099705 107% => OK
Prepositions: 0.079107505071 0.118717715034 67% => OK
Participles: 0.0324543610548 0.0351676179071 92% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.63516393847 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0628803245436 0.0309702414327 203% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0831643002028 0.0887237588012 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0202839756592 0.0209618222197 97% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0162271805274 0.0139019557991 117% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2493.0 2387.08602151 104% => OK
No of words: 442.0 408.028673835 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64027149321 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.309954751131 0.338922669872 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.235294117647 0.251872472559 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.156108597285 0.174417080927 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.110859728507 0.112833075102 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63516393847 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495475113122 0.524397521467 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 55.827136522 59.2087087015 94% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.2631578947 20.5533526081 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6350186918 48.84282405 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.210526316 120.699889404 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2631578947 20.5533526081 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.789473684211 0.644075263715 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 46.7925696594 45.7405998639 102% => OK
Elegance: 0.875816993464 1.45489161554 60% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315183841462 0.300154397459 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.121606117452 0.103427244359 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0700458578544 0.0752933317313 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.491369348546 0.497263757937 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.174501363312 0.151897553556 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121567734418 0.114077575197 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692549106009 0.0781384742642 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.434090367443 0.336927656856 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.070737281966 0.067059652881 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241069830501 0.210909579961 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558316937127 0.0618886996521 90% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.