Travelling is not only to visit places but it has some additional advantages which touches the inner feelings of the person's life. People take breaks for the purpose of travelling but actually they need break from the hectic schedule to relax themselves and to be free from the bondage of contemporary world. In my point of view, the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. I have some reasons to validate my stances which I will elaborate in the following essay.
To begin with, people are getting very hard time to entertain themselves and hardly getting time to spend properly with their family members. The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide because we are going to enjoy, not to be an organizer for the trip. Tour guides take responsibility of the trip and arrange nicely to cover maximum places in the stipulated number of days. Basically they are well aware of the places where we are travelling. It is their duty to arrange transportation, staying and food facilities according to our wish. There is no need to search for particular restaurant and hotel because they book everything preferring our taste. It will be more pleasant if we are going in a group to a foreign place where no one knows you. You can at least enjoy time and talk with your group people. There will not be any feeling of boredom and isolation in any country. My parents went to Singapore in a group of 25 people. They were very happy because everything was arranged well in advance and group had covered many places which people can not cover in particular number of days. They felt no communication problem because tour guide was helping them to communicate with their locals.
Secondly, tour packages cost less in compare to planning alone. There will always be an advantage of group. Booking a whole bus cost less in compare to book a seat. Hotel also gives immense discount if we are looking for number of rooms. Basically, tour package company used to have connection with everything for that they provide discount in everything. Who will deny for getting best things in less price? Same happened with my parents, their full travel expenditure was 30% less than if they plan separately. Tour guide had recommended proper market to purchase things and which was cheaper than other fancy markets.
Admittedly, some people argue that privacy and places selection will not be there. But as I contend that this is the best way if we want to travel without worries of transportation, rooms, food and even communication issues. To sum up, I always claim that it is noteworthy to travel in a group led by a tour guide.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...which touches the inner feelings of the persons life. People take breaks for the purpos...
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Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'getting the best'.
Suggestion: getting the best
...scount in everything. Who will deny for getting best things in less price? Same happened wit...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'at least', 'in particular', 'to begin with', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25 0.229887763892 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.170634920635 0.158761421928 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0714285714286 0.0866891130778 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.047619047619 0.046263068375 103% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0714285714286 0.0685040099705 104% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121031746032 0.118717715034 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0436507936508 0.0351676179071 124% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.57955532543 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0496031746032 0.0309702414327 160% => OK
Particles: 0.00198412698413 0.00188951952338 105% => OK
Determiners: 0.0714285714286 0.0887237588012 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.015873015873 0.0209618222197 76% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0138888888889 0.0139019557991 100% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2629.0 2387.08602151 110% => OK
No of words: 465.0 408.028673835 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65376344086 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.30752688172 0.338922669872 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.217204301075 0.251872472559 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.12688172043 0.174417080927 73% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0903225806452 0.112833075102 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57955532543 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486021505376 0.524397521467 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 55.3003884115 59.2087087015 93% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6684587814 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.2222222222 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0474533693 48.84282405 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3703703704 120.699889404 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.481481481481 0.644075263715 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 38.9426523297 45.7405998639 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.43150684932 1.45489161554 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373074274151 0.300154397459 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0889962214951 0.103427244359 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0627908570621 0.0752933317313 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.420989308416 0.497263757937 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.116915211325 0.151897553556 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127868705084 0.114077575197 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0971048766123 0.0781384742642 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.357954674933 0.336927656856 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0934449804959 0.067059652881 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270033394717 0.210909579961 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684372678039 0.0618886996521 111% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8870967742 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.