Everyone has their own preferred plan to travel, and all of them have their own good reasons and justifications for holding that opinion. In my point of view, it is better to travel in a group led by a tour guide than to travel all alone. I believe this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, traveling in a group helps an individual to gain more knowledge about a place and enjoy more, which are the two things that a traveler often struggle with. Many people think that they can discover the whole area just by reading a map or a tour guide book but there are fewer chances to get a real insight of that place without the assistance of a local tour guide that knows the place very well. My own experience is a very good example of this. When I went to Europe for the first time, my trip was not a great success initially because I could not figure out the important places to visit in given time. Also, I could not enjoy much as there were times when I got bored as I had no one to share my experiences with. Moreover, I could not get much information about the places that were historically important. However, when I hired a guide, he indeed not only provided me with all the essential knowledge about all the places monuments etc but he even proved to be a great friend. in addition, he also guided me to some of the good restaurants where I could get food of my choice at reasonable price. So, I enjoyed much later than before without a guide.
Furthermore, to travel in a group is more economical and safe as compared to traveling alone because going alone at some strange place is risky. Today, traveling is very expensive; people have to spend a huge amount of money on hotels, conveyance and food etc. Whereas, one can save a lot of money in a group as the expenses get split up among all the group members. As I said above, I began traveling alone and I had to bear the expenditure of the entire trip all by me, in fact I ended up frittering on food as I did not find cheaper places to eat. Conversely, when I took a help of a guide, I was able to save some money from my food budget and did some shopping from that amount. In addition, I was also able to see many isolated places with guide which otherwise I wouldn’t have been able to explore as it was not all safe to go at those places alone. Conspicuously, I had a very memorable, interesting and most importantly safe trip.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that travelling in a group led by a tour guide is weigh better than travelling alone. This is because guides are very informative and supportive and also it is the best way to enjoy maximum at minimum price.
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... to enjoy maximum at minimum price.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'conversely', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'well', 'whereas', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.178378378378 0.229887763892 78% => OK
Verbs: 0.162162162162 0.158761421928 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0882882882883 0.0866891130778 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0774774774775 0.046263068375 167% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0738738738739 0.0685040099705 108% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118918918919 0.118717715034 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0306306306306 0.0351676179071 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.5286624742 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0396396396396 0.0309702414327 128% => OK
Particles: 0.00540540540541 0.00188951952338 286% => OK
Determiners: 0.100900900901 0.0887237588012 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0126126126126 0.0209618222197 60% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.018018018018 0.0139019557991 130% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2696.0 2387.08602151 113% => OK
No of words: 505.0 408.028673835 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33861386139 5.86048508987 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.48200974243 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.237623762376 0.338922669872 70% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.162376237624 0.251872472559 64% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.112871287129 0.174417080927 65% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0851485148515 0.112833075102 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5286624742 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465346534653 0.524397521467 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 53.7011870101 59.2087087015 91% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0476190476 20.5533526081 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7271901862 48.84282405 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.380952381 120.699889404 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0476190476 20.5533526081 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.644075263715 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 40.28524281 45.7405998639 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.04597701149 1.45489161554 72% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341635212718 0.300154397459 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0990646267719 0.103427244359 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0632299576122 0.0752933317313 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.449799939394 0.497263757937 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.139723910848 0.151897553556 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122487276193 0.114077575197 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670065692559 0.0781384742642 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.328417387832 0.336927656856 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0655115046306 0.067059652881 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260784646476 0.210909579961 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287782353165 0.0618886996521 46% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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