In today's world, due to development of technology, we can get news feed from various resources. People believe that a person should acquire information from multiple news resources to become a well- informed candidate. Personally, due to several reasons, I agree with the people notion.
First of all, a single news sources cannot include the news of worldwide. The world is big and there are various event- political, sports, war, crime- occurring in it, so a single news sources can be cramped place to include all. Basic newspaper, for instance, are primarily focused on current community, political, and social affair. To know best about a current literature, we have to look on "Aldaily.com" and for recent scientific discovery we have to look "Elsevier.com". Therefore, A single person can only be well updated if he looks on various news sites.
Moreover, The false publication also one the reason to look on various sites. Recent day's we hear many news scandal( false news given by any news sources). Sources may also be prejudiced while delivering the news to the public, giving an incomplete information. So in order to prevent from such misleading news a person should be informed from myriad sources. You can take the example of Nepal: During election period of Nepal, one media focused on one particular candidate, rendering a positive aspects of him while disguising his negative aspects. Further, similar events occurred with another media. So if a person reads only a single news paper, he may be fascinated towards that politician only, causing oblivion about another competitive candidate.
However, some may argue that there single resource which includes entire events of activity occurring in this world. In fact there may be but these news resource usually contain only a brief summary of the events, lacking the enough information about what causes such event and what will be it's effect in future time frame.
Finally, due a above mentioned reason, people, in my opinion, should look into various resources to become a well-informed citizen.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'single news'.
Suggestion: single news
...ith the people notion. First of all, a single news sources cannot include the news of worl...
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Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'events'?
Suggestion: events
... The world is big and there are various event- political, sports, war, crime- occurri...
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Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'single news'.
Suggestion: single news
...sports, war, crime- occurring in it, so a single news sources can be cramped place to include...
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Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...k on various sites. Recent days we hear many news scandal false news given by any ne...
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Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much news', 'a good deal of news'.
Suggestion: much news; a good deal of news
...k on various sites. Recent days we hear many news scandal false news given by any news so...
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Line 5, column 427, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one medium', 'a medium', or simply 'media'?
Suggestion: one medium; a medium; media
...Nepal: During election period of Nepal, one media focused on one particular candidate, re...
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Line 5, column 495, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'aspect'?
Suggestion: aspect
...ticular candidate, rendering a positive aspects of him while disguising his negative as...
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Line 5, column 637, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...dia. So if a person reads only a single news paper, he may be fascinated towards that poli...
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Line 7, column 143, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
...in this world. In fact there may be but these news resource usually contain only a brief s...
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Line 9, column 14, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t in future time frame. Finally, due a above mentioned reason, people, in my o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in fact, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25671641791 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01903075003 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579104477612 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1231293317 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8333333333 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6111111111 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72222222222 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192629065389 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666581288647 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512977944785 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109552748755 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05819986068 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.