To deal with any projects, the first is to get information from many different news resources and then you should take strategies. There is no doubt that information is really a crucial factor to be successful, especially when the highly developed society and the benefits of making decisions are considered.
To begin with, the society is changing in an unbelievable speed that you need more different news resources to update your information, or the out-of-date information is just useless even harmful. For example, Jobs found that more and more people have the need of smart phones due to the latest survey from the Internet. Thus he made a decision that gave up all the traditional phones and invested a new kind of smart phones. As we all know, this is a great decision. On the contrary, Nokie still kept on the out-of-date news that people just need phones to call others not surf the Internet. And in the end, this company came to its end. Just by many resources, you could get the latest news.
Moreover, the more resources you own, the more benefits you get. In fact, it is almost impossible to get the whole knowledge that you need. So if you just have one or two resources, sometimes it will not give you the best strategy and even will lead you into a wrong way. Take myself as an instance, I usually bought books from the library in the past. But there are always some books that I couldn’t find because only two small libraries located in my city. Since I found the online shopping websites like Amazon and Dangdang, the situation changed a lot. So various kinds of books in these websites and I don’t worry about looking for books which takes me a lot of time. So it benefits you a lot if you have more different resources.
Admittedly, some time is wasted during looking for different resources and many of them are not helpful at all. But it saves more time comparing with the little time of looking for different resources and gives you more benefits by combining all the useful information you get.
Due to the aforementioned ground, I insist on the necessary of getting information from many different news resources.
- TPO-16 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO-19 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO-25 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO-32 - Integrated Writing Task Starting in the 1960s and continuing until the 1980s, sailors in Russian submarines patrolling the North Alantic and Arctic Ocean would occasionally hear strange sounds. These underwater noises reminded the submarine crews 88
- TPO-44 - Integrated Writing Task In 1957 a European silver coin dating to the eleventh century was discovered at a Native American archaeological site in the state of Maine in the United States. Many people believed the coin had been originally brought to 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...s, the first is to get information from many different news resources and then you should take...
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Line 3, column 322, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...to the latest survey from the Internet. Thus he made a decision that gave up all the...
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Line 9, column 89, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...e necessary of getting information from many different news resources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, moreover, really, so, still, then, thus, for example, in fact, kind of, no doubt, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7400530504 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63334448233 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511936339523 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8032295403 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.35 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.85 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208565653342 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714538574704 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738769139685 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147518490112 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473635081357 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.