In this advanced era, people are dealing with a vast particular subjects in order to refresh and improve their knowledge. Despite the fact some people believe that reading many variety of information sources makes people to be update, some other think it is just waste of time. I personally concur with the former group's idea. I will explicate my point of view thought the following paragraphs.
One of the reasons that immediately coming to mind at first some source of information have discussed totality and have a general knowledge. There are many useful causes which have represented information without any reasons and details and we can encounter on the internet, newspapers and so on. As a representative example, last week I went library as studying and researching after that I found a book on my major which had a litter material about my Reserch project. Although I did not find a book in order to get relevant knowledge, at end I decided to enquiry on the internet. As a result, I received my favorite date by many reasons and details. Moreover, general themes of any news are useful but for many question and problems or some subject that you are interested in, we need more details and valuable knowledge. Hence, by checking many particular subjects beside the general knowledge, we can get lots of informations and details.
Furthermore, some of the source of the information is archaic and not confidential. In this cause, some of the science people such as professors, instructors and other learners should pay attention to the date of information and source. Here is an example to illustrate this, in my university student should write an article about the methods of renews energy and when we try to look for information about this, we face lots of antiquated knowledge after that by studying others scientific 's article we can receive the lastest information. Needless to say, studying update and new information have a positive effect rather than primitive knowledge. In addition, every day we have big challenge by technology, science and some infection diseases and so on and the people should have a variety of modern information to more understand and they can attenuate problems.
To make it brief by the above reasons, getting information from the variety sources have a many benefits but some origin have a general knowledge and some origin does not have a update informations. As a result, by studying many resource in different way we can find the lastest knowledge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 65, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'subject'?
Suggestion: subject
...ople are dealing with a vast particular subjects in order to refresh and improve their k...
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Line 2, column 173, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun variety seems to be countable; consider using: 'many varieties'.
Suggestion: many varieties
...e fact some people believe that reading many variety of information sources makes people to ...
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Line 2, column 315, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'groups'' or 'group's'?
Suggestion: groups'; group's
...me. I personally concur with the former groups idea. I will explicate my point of view...
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Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'general knowledge'.
Suggestion: general knowledge
...mation have discussed totality and have a general knowledge. There are many useful causes which hav...
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Line 3, column 709, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun question seems to be countable; consider using: 'many questions'.
Suggestion: many questions
...l themes of any news are useful but for many question and problems or some subject that you a...
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Line 4, column 14, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...informations and details. Furthermore, some of the source of the information is archaic an...
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Line 4, column 99, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ic and not confidential. In this cause, some of the science people such as professors, inst...
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Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...knowledge and some origin does not have a update informations. As a result, by st...
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Line 5, column 224, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun resource seems to be countable; consider using: 'many resources'.
Suggestion: many resources
... informations. As a result, by studying many resource in different way we can find the lastes...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'so', 'in addition', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.245614035088 0.229887763892 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.140350877193 0.158761421928 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.109649122807 0.0866891130778 126% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0241228070175 0.046263068375 52% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0548245614035 0.0685040099705 80% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125 0.118717715034 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0285087719298 0.0351676179071 81% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.86230897433 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0241228070175 0.0309702414327 78% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.109649122807 0.0887237588012 124% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0197368421053 0.0209618222197 94% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00877192982456 0.0139019557991 63% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2499.0 2387.08602151 105% => OK
No of words: 418.0 408.028673835 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.97846889952 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.38038277512 0.338922669872 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.303827751196 0.251872472559 121% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.200956937799 0.174417080927 115% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.133971291866 0.112833075102 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86230897433 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504784688995 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 56.2490308343 59.2087087015 95% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.2222222222 20.5533526081 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1644095196 48.84282405 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.833333333 120.699889404 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 20.5533526081 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.611111111111 0.644075263715 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.54480286738 162% => OK
Readability: 53.6049973418 45.7405998639 117% => OK
Elegance: 1.82 1.45489161554 125% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232559645328 0.300154397459 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.114364835585 0.103427244359 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0762391496549 0.0752933317313 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.511688930258 0.497263757937 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.143418003419 0.151897553556 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984496147776 0.114077575197 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332853702503 0.0781384742642 43% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.361406546028 0.336927656856 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.093152313022 0.067059652881 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167725102524 0.210909579961 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130742920824 0.0618886996521 21% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.75985663082 254% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.