TPO 2 _ Independent Task
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Some people do not tell truth in their relationship with their family, colleagues and friends because of different reasons. I am of the opinion that trust plays a crucial role in every relationship. Should people realize the significance of trust in the stability of any relationship, they will ponder over it much more scrupulously. I will delve into the most important reasons to illustrate my viewpoint in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, it is axiomatic that no one can trust a person who lies. In other words, trust is so fragile. And nothing can break the trust between two people like a lie. To illustrate the idea, let’s consider the following experience from my own life. I had a colleague at the university, and once she lied about something she had to prepare and our boss understood the truth. After that, our boss never trusted her again. Thus, nobody could overlook the fact that on numerous occasions, telling truth leads to stability in relationships.
The second rationale why I advocate this point of view lies in the fact people who tell the truth are healthier. That is because when you tell the truth, you have no concerns about the possibilities of being caught by the person you have lied. The noteworthy intelligible statistics, revealed by a recent research conducted in my country, show that people who do not lie, feel better during the day at work. So if we want to be healthier, we must tell the truth in our relationships.
The last but not the least reason supporting my perspective would be the indisputable fact that the only way to be confident in a relationship is being honest. It cannot be denied that whenever you lie, you have less confidence than while telling the truth. For example when I honestly tell my problems to my girlfriend, I earn peace in my mind and I fell confidence. As a result, being honest is a key point in a happier life.
By taking all above-mentioned arguments into consideration, the following conclusion can be drawn about the issue. I strongly believe that honesty is the most important factor in every relationship. This is because by telling truth we can gain deeper relationships, improve our heath and become more confidence.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
flaws:
Most sentences have subjects: 'I, you, we, or people'. We can little bit polish the sentences to make it better, for example:
when you tell the truth, you have no concerns about the possibilities of being caught by the person you have lied.
revised:
Always telling the truth will bring no concerns about the possibilities of being caught by the person you have lied.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 378 350
No. of Characters: 1781 1500
No. of Different Words: 201 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.409 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.712 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.819 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 110 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 84 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 61 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 50 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.182 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.357 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.409 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.284 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.284 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.096 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'lain'.
Suggestion: lain
... of being caught by the person you have lied. The noteworthy intelligible statistics...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'honestly', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'so', 'thus', 'while', 'for example', 'as a result', 'in other words', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.209905660377 0.229887763892 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.172169811321 0.158761421928 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0683962264151 0.0866891130778 79% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0424528301887 0.046263068375 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0872641509434 0.0685040099705 127% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.125 0.118717715034 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0353773584906 0.0351676179071 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.94683939736 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0188679245283 0.0309702414327 61% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.11320754717 0.0887237588012 128% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0259433962264 0.0209618222197 124% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0165094339623 0.0139019557991 119% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2210.0 2387.08602151 93% => OK
No of words: 378.0 408.028673835 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84656084656 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.309523809524 0.338922669872 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.232804232804 0.251872472559 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.171957671958 0.174417080927 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.134920634921 0.112833075102 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94683939736 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544973544974 0.524397521467 104% => OK
Word variations: 60.9455253165 59.2087087015 103% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.1818181818 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2516388709 48.84282405 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.454545455 120.699889404 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.545454545455 0.644075263715 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 40.4622414622 45.7405998639 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.2265625 1.45489161554 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.446879241396 0.300154397459 149% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0812177183236 0.103427244359 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.054032198708 0.0752933317313 72% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.47941453246 0.497263757937 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.124043671737 0.151897553556 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156188986887 0.114077575197 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844899183897 0.0781384742642 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.333818770251 0.336927656856 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0719632818623 0.067059652881 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293879588027 0.210909579961 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350695351907 0.0618886996521 57% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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